Baby, don't cry

Description

16-year old _____, is trapped in a small white hospital room all her life. One day, she finally breaks out. 


But who said she's safe?


There are men, chasing her to repay the debt of her father.


Then she meets him. Will he be able to protect her?

Foreword

 “Baekhyun,” I repeat in a whisper, and I start crying. Tears fall freely out of my eyes, stinging my face as it flows. “They put you here too?”

“Yes,” he whispers, and very gently, presses my head against his chest. “It’s okay. Shh, calm down. They didn’t do anything to me.”

I sob, my breaths heavy and desperate, echoing within the dark cell. “You’re so nice to me,” I cry. When I’m the reason why you’re here, I don’t deserve someone like you.”

He touches my face softly. “It’s not your fault.” 

 

NOTE: This is our first fanfic and we apologize for any errors. Comments are highly appreciated! 

 

(c) 2012, May. Created by EXOticbacon.

All ideas are our own. No part of this may be reproduced or used.

Poster by gongchanisallmine07! :) Isn't it amazing?

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nabmyn-ssi #1
OMG! I'm your 100 subscriber! :D
alwaysmile9
#2
it's great! i wanna a sequel!! :) can't wait for it
byunahrin
#3
Waiting for the sequel~~~ Muehehe. I cant wait. I want them to be together again. T_T It hurts me to see Baekhyun hurt. OHMYBAEKKIE, stay strong. I'm sure you'll meet her someday and live with her forever. I'm sure with it. DONT WORRY. STAY STRONG, OKAY? :')
cypherkook
#4
S-E-Q-U-E-L!!!!!!!i need SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
donttouchmychicken
#5
can't wait for the sequel! I really like this fanfic! hehe
d3vilsangel #6
You guys better make a sequel or else. LOL no jkjk but i would rly love a sequel. Great job guys! <3
Parity
#7
Whyd she leave him?? *sobs*
byulshi
#8
Whoa! I wasn't expecting this O.O I'm going to read the sequel for sure!! I hope they will live happily ever after <3
EXOticbacon #9
Thank you all so much for the supports and kind comments!
The link to the sequel is at the end of the last chapter in case you guys didn't see~
thank you :)