Chapter 10

The Ultimate Weapon

Soobin took the time that Gunil was away from his house to clean up a bit, and get all of his and Taehyun's clothes into a pile to bring to a laundry mat in town to get his and Taehyun's clothes washed when Taehyun did show up. And maybe get a new phone too. Not knowing where Taehyun was did cause some anxiety in Soobin, and it worried him when it took longer than usual for Taehyun to show up.
 

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Taehyun had been on his way back to Gunil's house when he started being followed by someone. He stopped his bike at a stoplight and made sure to text Gunil about being followed. He just hoped that he'd be rescued before something happened. He put his phone in his pocket when the light turned green and waited until the car next to him turned before continuing his journey.

Despite everything he did to be cautious about everything, Taehyun didn't expect a car to run a redlight at full speed, colliding with him and sending him flying over the car and onto the ground, rolling a few feet before coming to a stop. People stopped their cars and someone called an ambulance immediately. Taehyun faded into unconsciousness after the yelling started, the last thing on his mind was making sure that Soobin was okay.

 

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Gunil almost exposed himself as he rushed over at almost slightly faster than human speed, rolling Taehyun over onto his back to check on his injuries. "Stay with me kid!" Shouted Gunil as he gently checked over Taehyun and his injuries, going over what he understood about humans and their easily breakable bodies.

The sounds of sirens filled the air as Gunil mumbled about broken ribs and a broken leg amongst other things. As paramedics showed up to check on Taehyun Gunil felt numb, but he moved away when a paramedic put a hand on his shoulder, asking him to move away.

Gunil could hear whining from the beast in its cage, something that surprised even him. He had enough sense to ask which hospital Taehyun was being transported to before leaving and going to let Soobin know of what happened to Taehyun.

It didn't mean he didn't miss the car that sped off however, and he quickly noted the color, make and model along with what brief glimpse he had of the license plate as Gunil headed back to his house in a daze.

 

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"What do you mean he's in the hospital?!" Shouted Soobin as he shoved Gunil back. "Where the hell have you been anyway huh?!" He yelled as he threw a punch, to which Gunil stopped easily as he gripped onto Soobin's wrist rather hard, causing Soobin to wince.

"I'll take care of it," growled Gunil. "I'm pissed too, that it happened," he grit out as he let go of Soobin's wrist, and Soobin dropped his arm. "Right now you need to head to the hospital," he added. "Your best friend needs you right now," he encouraged.

"I- you're right," huffed Soobin as he tried to calm himself down. "W-Which hospital did you say he was in?" He asked, moving away from Gunil whos eyes had turned pitch black as his vampire side came forward.

"He went to the one near the other side of town," said Gunil as he managed to keep his voice from portraying the anger he felt. "C-Can you take me there?" Asked Soobin as he shivered at how cold Gunil sounded. "I don't want to go alone," he mumbled when Gunil looked at him.

"When I do you better stay with him unless told by a doctor and wait for my return, okay?" Asked Gunil. "I'll see if someone can come over before then, but I'll be over when I can okay?" He asked, serious now as he tried to bring in his vampire side.

Soobin nodded and went to change clothes, grabbing his laptop and charger along with Taehyun's, putting them in a bag before walking over to Gunil who stood outside waiting. He made sure to lock the door, slinging the bag on his shoulder and turning to Gunil.

"So how are we getting there?" asked Soobin as Gunil turned to him. "Easy," said Gunil as he turned around and leaned down. "Hop on my back, we'll be there in no time," he said. "I- are you sure?" Asked Soobin. "Don't worry about it kid," said Gunil. "You're safer at the hospital right now," he hummed. "R-Right," mumbled Soobin as he jumped onto Gunil's back, Gunil quickly adjusting him and the bag that he carried, standing and making sure Soobin wouldn't fall suddenly.

"Okay kid, close your eyes," said Gunil as he started walking, making sure he would be able to run without accidentally dropping Soobin. "W-what are you-" started Soobin before Gunil started running, shouting in surprise at the speed before he closed his eyes tightly, hanging on for dear life as he tried not to let the panic set in.

In what felt like forever Soobin felt Gunil slow down, opening his eyes when he felt Gunil stop. Gunil leaned down, letting Soobin slide off his back and nearly stumble to the ground in shock. "W-we made it, right," mumbled Soobin as he tried to calm his fast heartbeat.

"You've already seen the beast," said Gunil as he turned to Soobin. "Now I'm showing you my true self," he added. "T-True self, right," grumbled Soobin as he took a deep breath. Gunil couldn't help but chuckle at that, shaking his head.

"Are you going to be okay?" Asked Gunil. "Yeah, I should be fine," said Soobin as he took another deep breath, nodding. "I'll be back as soon as I can okay?" asked Gunil. Soobin nodded, turning and walking into the hospital. Gunil turned and headed back to his house, needing to get his rifle and do some scouting. It was time to exact revenge, and it had been a while since Gunil had used his rifle.

After getting his rifle and making sure everything was still in working order and loading it with one bullet Gunil left his house, heading to where he had seen the car drive in the direction of from the crash site.

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Epilogue. That's it, that's all folks, I hope you enjoyed reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it~!

Also who do you think the figures were?

And the next story is up! We're back to the spinoff universe for this one if you want to read it!

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Chapter 1: Alright, let's dive into this review head-first without further adieu hahaha.

So, starting off with your character planning in the foreward, you laid everything out nice and simply for the reader by providing much-needed context as to what happened in the past. Though, I, personally as a writer, wouldn't flat-out tell us, the audience, the major plot twist for chapter one; the fact that Gunil changes his form. That's truly the only "major" critique I can give you as far as the foreward is concerned as you, as I previously said, did a good job.

Chapter one is paced well and is smooth to read and understand, I applaud you for that hahaha. Much like the foreward, I don't have much to truly critique you as far as content is concerned, though I do have a few suggestions to further improve your writing. Try not to use "said" so much, instead try other describing words like exclaimed, informed, or announced. Such a thing might seem like a small tweek, but it'll truly take your writing to the next level and noticeably enhance your work.

Once again, you've got a brilliant start, good work! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story as it gets published. :)