The Ultimate Weapon

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Gunil is what everyone would call the ultimate weapon. He was groomed from the day he had been turned to fight and continue fighting until he outlived his usefulness. What happens when someone challenges his views? Will Gunil change for the better? Or will his ideals lead to his own demise?

Foreword

Hai~! Author-nim here with another story! Welcome back to the main series! This time featuring Xdinary Heroes and another group that I haven't introduced yet but will do in this story!

Fun fact, in this story Gunil is Jisung's [of Stray Kids] older brother! I had to do this, as they look like they could be siblings.

I've been meaning to add TXT for a while, but never got around to it due to having no real spot for them until now. Now I get to introduce two new groups to the series!

People are going to probably wonder why I went with these two groups in particular. I just did because I feel like both groups would get along. Though the only two people in this group that will show up is Gunil and Soobin. Gunil for obvious reasons and Soobin because I don't think anyone else would work him as well. Though Taehyun will make his appearance as time goes on, I think Gunil will work best with Soobin. Maybe both him and Taehyun too. We'll see.

Also I feel like I don't add enough humans to this series whatsoever xD Soobin will remain human hopefully but Taehyun? I don't know.

Now onto the characters~!

 

Characters:



Gunil: A turned werewolf turned vampire who was groomed from the very beginning to be a killer. He was turned as an experiment and tortured until he basically broke before being groomed to be a killer. He was lucky enough to get out of it, but some of the things that he had been taught to do stuck with him. He can seem cold hearted at first but is a caring person underneath that icy exterior. He is a vampire and werewolf hunter, under his own faction. He is also the only hybrid where his wolf form is bipedal, a side effect from having his body be forced to physically transform into his wolf form every time he changes. His wolf form is a large bipedal wolf with black fur and streaks of white along his underside and many battle scars all over his body seen in his wolf and human forms. As a hunter he is most known for using a rifle in his hunts, and he was the one who encouraged and taught Yunho how to use a sniper rifle. His go to rifle is a standard bolt action hunting rifle. He is also the leader of the Russian coven that controls Moscow, even though he rarely spends time in the city due to his home being somewhere outside of Moscow in a small town surrounded by forest.

Soobin: A human who met Gunil by pure coincidence. Rumors of a beast roaming outside of his small town in the middle of pretty much nowhere had sparked his curiosity. He knew Russia had its myths and legends but he didn't believe them to be true until he ran into Gunil while hiking through the woods one day to meet up with his best friend Taehyun. He was scared of Gunil's wolf form at first, but now he just wants to get to know him, as Soobin had a knack of bringing the best out of people.

Taehyun: A human who is Soobin's best friend. He didn't believe Soobin when Soobin came to him about Gunil, but humors him anyway. He knew there was always something odd about Gunil as he had moved to their small town rather recently from what he had heard, but chose to ignore the rumors and leave Gunil alone. He is more of Soobin's protector at this point, because back when they were growing up Taehyun had saved Soobin from some bullies and despite the two year Soobin treated Taehyun like they were equal, and Taehyun was happy that he wasn't being treated like a kid anymore. Him being younger than Soobin made him immature at times, but he did have a good heart and trusted that Soobin could take care of himself.

I hope you enjoy the story~!

 

Thanks to ErrorMacro713 for the poster :D

akirasanogame
Epilogue. That's it, that's all folks, I hope you enjoyed reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it~!

Also who do you think the figures were?

And the next story is up! We're back to the spinoff universe for this one if you want to read it!

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Chapter 1: Alright, let's dive into this review head-first without further adieu hahaha.

So, starting off with your character planning in the foreward, you laid everything out nice and simply for the reader by providing much-needed context as to what happened in the past. Though, I, personally as a writer, wouldn't flat-out tell us, the audience, the major plot twist for chapter one; the fact that Gunil changes his form. That's truly the only "major" critique I can give you as far as the foreward is concerned as you, as I previously said, did a good job.

Chapter one is paced well and is smooth to read and understand, I applaud you for that hahaha. Much like the foreward, I don't have much to truly critique you as far as content is concerned, though I do have a few suggestions to further improve your writing. Try not to use "said" so much, instead try other describing words like exclaimed, informed, or announced. Such a thing might seem like a small tweek, but it'll truly take your writing to the next level and noticeably enhance your work.

Once again, you've got a brilliant start, good work! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story as it gets published. :)