Gate 32

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*TUESDAY* 

 

From: Hyukkie y

To: Hae 

 

Made it! \(•[]•\) 

 

From: Hae 

To: Hyukkie 

 

Yay!!!! I miss youuuuuu (T-T) 

 

From: Hyukkie 

To: Hae 

 

How's school? ;D

 

From: Hae 

To: Hyukkie 

 

Terrible without you (T-T)

 

From: Hyukkie 

To: Hae 

 

You have other friends tho (•><•) 

 

From: Hae 

To: Hyukkie 

 

Sungmin is all up on Kyuhyun same way with Kyuhyun, and I don't really have other friends because I spend all my time with you (not complaining). (T-T) 

 

From: Hyukkie 

To: Hae 

 

Awe, I'm sorry (T-T) I would be there if I could. Promise! _/|\_ 

 

From: Hae 

To: Hyukkie 

 

I know you would. Do you have any friends to hang out with? 

 

From: Hyukkie 

To: Hae 

 

I used to when I lived here but their off to college now like me. ;P

 

From: Hae 

To: Hyukkie

 

Ohhh, well at least that means I can't be replaced. :p

 

From: Hyukkie 

To: Hae 

 

You couldn't be replaced 

 

From: Hae 

To: Hyukkie 

 

Ok good :D 

 

From: Hyukkie 

To: Hae 

 

Haha I gotta go ttyl! ;D

 

From: Hae 

To: Hyukkie 

 

Ok you better byeeee ;) 

 

*AT HYUKJAE'S AUNT AND UNCLE'S HOUSE* Hyukjae's POV

 

"Hey Wookie. Whatcha doin?" I asked, Wookie is my Cousin he's 17 so about to go to college. We've always been close.

 

"Oh hi, nothing much. What are you doing?" Wookie asked. "Hello?" He asked as he looked at me weirdly. 

 

"Oh sorry. I was just thinking about somebody." I said as I smiled. 

 

"Ok, here, now. Tell me who you like and who it is. I need background checks." Wookie said as he patted his bed for me to come sit down. Wookie was always SUPER overprotective. 

 

"Wookie I'm 19 I think I can handle my own life. Anyway his name in Lee DongHae. He's 19 and we're basically best friends. He just started hanging out with me about 2 months ago. But we got really close. But I've liked him ever since school started. Sometimes I think he likes me but idk." I said. 

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Piranhae07
#1
Chapter 2: Hihiiiii just wanna give some feedback as a fellow author actually ^^; this is the first fic of yours that I'm reading and I really like the flow! But I guess some word of advice... perhaps you could use italic font when it comes to thoughts or message texts. And also use less exclamation marks, question marks and capital letters. To show surprise or horror or shock maybe you could perhaps use: Wide eyed, I yell in shock, "OMG! You scared me!"
Somethin liddat :)

And for time jumps like 10min later etc, perhaps you could have a bit more content in between and say like: As usual I'm always aware of the hot Lee Donghae sitting behind me but the usual lecture is so boring. Luckily it ends in another hour and I quickly pack my things.
Somethin like dis :))

Sorry if anything I say offends you ^^; but as a writer myself, I guess I just see potential in your writing and just wanna help you get better!
LeeLenaMx #2
Chapter 14: This story is so sweet and fluffy! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
OdetteSwan
934 streak #3
Chapter 14: This was such a cute, nervous, exciting first date!
Thank you so much for sharing.
Camomile15 #4
Chapter 14: Will there be any sequel? Or special chap to see ths couple
aishahjs2101 #5
Chapter 13: Finally.. they're confessing .. both of them just too cute...
OdetteSwan
934 streak #6
Chapter 12: An HSM marathon! What could be more appropriate.
Thanks for the update!
OdetteSwan
934 streak #7
Chapter 11: That was a cute situation for Donghae to realize how he feels about Hyukjae.
Thank you so much for the update.
OdetteSwan
934 streak #8
Chapter 10: Thanks for the update.
At least Siwon has a new love interest.
I hope the lip synch does not get Hyuk into trouble with Donghae.
Waiting for your update.
OdetteSwan
934 streak #9
Chapter 9: In the two universities I worked in, the students have lockers. So no worries about lockers.
What is Siwon doing? If he was sorry for leaving Donghae, why does he want to spend time with Hyuk? Or is he trying to stop the growing attraction and affection between Donghae and Hyuk?
I just hope that Hyuk would know how to protect his relationship with Hae.
Thank you so much for the update. Don't let us wait too much unless unavoidable! <3<3<3
Camomile15 #10
Chapter 9: Why i feel siwon wanna mess their relationship