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Hyukjae's POV  *Friday*

 

"I'm gonna go dance. You coming?" I said me Hae and Yesung we're standing outside of the school. 

 

"Yeah." Hae said. 

 

"Can I come?" Yesung said. 

 

"Yeah. I didn't know you dance." I said as we started walking to the dance studio. Hae didn't seem happy at all I didn't know why. 

 

"I don't. But I bet you dance really good. I mean look at you. No wonder your so fit." Yesung said. 

 

"Oh- I- uh thanks." I said as I look down. 

 

Something seemed really of with Hae the whole time we were dancing. He kept messing up and he seemed really spaced out. He just seemed mad.... at me.

 

I was going to go get changed in the locker room. When Hae came in out of nowhere. 

 

"Why did you let him come?" Hae said he got really close to me more than usual. 

 

"Because he asked. What was I gonna say? No?" I said as I backed up a little bit but he got closer still. 

 

"Sure. It works." Hae said in my face. 

 

"I couldn't be mean. And why don't you want him here?" I said this time I just stayed there.

 

"Because what have WE always done on Friday's ever since I've met you? Why are you so nice to him? You just met him." Hae said. 

 

I stayed quiet for a second. I was confused. "We've always danced. But what's so wrong with him coming along to watch? And I'm nice to him because I want him to feel accepted. Why were you so nice to me when you first met me?" I said Hae seemed really confused. So was I. 

 

"I was nice to you because I wanted to be. I wanted to be friends. I wasn't expecting for me to get so mad if anyone hung out with you that wasn't me. Or want to punch Yesung because he came along with us." Hae said. He was dangerously close to my face. 

 

"Why do you get mad then?" I said I was so confused. 

 

"Idk it just does something to me. I don't know why I get so jealous." He said as he backed up but on a little. 

 

"Idk either." I said as we walked out of the locker room. "You ready?" I said to Yesung. 

 

"Yeah. You're amazing!" Yesung said. 

 

"Thank you." I said. 

 

"You're awesome too DongHae." Yesung said. 

 

"Thank you." Hae said. 

 

*IN THE CAR WITH HYUK AND HAE.* DongHae's POV

 

I really don't like Yesung. It's not his personality. It's just that him and Hyukkie hang it more and more. I don't like it. Atleast I have Saturday's that I can spend with Hyukkie. 

 

It was awkward in the car because of earlier. 

 

"Hyukjae... I'm sorry. I shouldn't have reacted like that. It's just ever since Yesung showed up we're not the same anymore. I miss the way it was, I miss us." I said. I didn't really know why I was saying the rest of it besides sorry I just had to get it off my chest. 

 

"It's ok, I've gotten jealous of Kyuhyun hanging out with other friends before." Hyukkie said. It made me feel better that he knew how I felt. 

 

*MONDAY* Hyukjae's POV

 

"HYUKJAE!!! YOU'RE AN AMAZING DANCER!!!" One girl said to Hyukjae 

 

"HYUKJAE CAN YOU TEACH ME HOW TO DANCE?!?" One boy said. 

 

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Piranhae07
#1
Chapter 2: Hihiiiii just wanna give some feedback as a fellow author actually ^^; this is the first fic of yours that I'm reading and I really like the flow! But I guess some word of advice... perhaps you could use italic font when it comes to thoughts or message texts. And also use less exclamation marks, question marks and capital letters. To show surprise or horror or shock maybe you could perhaps use: Wide eyed, I yell in shock, "OMG! You scared me!"
Somethin liddat :)

And for time jumps like 10min later etc, perhaps you could have a bit more content in between and say like: As usual I'm always aware of the hot Lee Donghae sitting behind me but the usual lecture is so boring. Luckily it ends in another hour and I quickly pack my things.
Somethin like dis :))

Sorry if anything I say offends you ^^; but as a writer myself, I guess I just see potential in your writing and just wanna help you get better!
LeeLenaMx #2
Chapter 14: This story is so sweet and fluffy! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
OdetteSwan
934 streak #3
Chapter 14: This was such a cute, nervous, exciting first date!
Thank you so much for sharing.
Camomile15 #4
Chapter 14: Will there be any sequel? Or special chap to see ths couple
aishahjs2101 #5
Chapter 13: Finally.. they're confessing .. both of them just too cute...
OdetteSwan
934 streak #6
Chapter 12: An HSM marathon! What could be more appropriate.
Thanks for the update!
OdetteSwan
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Chapter 11: That was a cute situation for Donghae to realize how he feels about Hyukjae.
Thank you so much for the update.
OdetteSwan
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Chapter 10: Thanks for the update.
At least Siwon has a new love interest.
I hope the lip synch does not get Hyuk into trouble with Donghae.
Waiting for your update.
OdetteSwan
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Chapter 9: In the two universities I worked in, the students have lockers. So no worries about lockers.
What is Siwon doing? If he was sorry for leaving Donghae, why does he want to spend time with Hyuk? Or is he trying to stop the growing attraction and affection between Donghae and Hyuk?
I just hope that Hyuk would know how to protect his relationship with Hae.
Thank you so much for the update. Don't let us wait too much unless unavoidable! <3<3<3
Camomile15 #10
Chapter 9: Why i feel siwon wanna mess their relationship