The Break Up

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DongHae and Siwon have been dating for about a month and a half. It was a contractrelationship. Siwon has cought feelings for DongHae. But DongHae hadn't. Siwon just wasn't Donghae's  type. But DongHae didn't really like anybody. Until he got in touch with one of his best friends good friend. The moment he saw him he just wanted to make him happy and make him feel important. He didn't know why. He just knew he wanted to make him happy and see him smile. 

 

They're on a date. At a restaurant. 

 

"I have to talk to you." Siwon says regretfully.  

 

"What is it?" DongHae asks with a questioning look. 

 

"We can't be together anymore." Siwon says with tears in his eyes. 

 

"Why?!?" DongHae starts crying immediately. Sure he didn't really like Siwon. But it still hurts to get broken up with. 

 

"I have to give all my time to my fathers business, I'm the heir." Siwon says with a regretful look. 

 

"But what about the contract?!" DongHae says with anger, he's scared he'll get disowned. 

 

"I can't do anything about it. So I have to break up with you. Maybe later when I get more stable with my job we can be together again. I already talked to our parents about it. They understand."

 

"How could my parents not tell me?!?" DongHae says then he stands up and walks out of the restaurant. 

 

"DONGHAE WAIT!!!!" Siwon yells as he looks at Donghae walk out of his life. He just stays there and sobs. 

 

As Donghae walks out he's overwhelmed with feelings. He wants to find a safe place and that place is with Sungmin, his best friend.

 

Sungmin's POV

 

*hears knock on door* 

"Hello?" 

 

"Sungmin he broke up with me." DongHae says as he explains at my door step. 

 

"Why?!?" I said as I rub Donghae's back in efforts to comfort him.  

 

"He said he has to give his full attention to his work and doesn't have time for me" DongHae says as he calms down. 

 

"I'm gonna kill him." I say as I think about how I should get away with this and whilst plotting his death. 

 

"No, it's ok. I told him not to contact me so I'll be ok." DongHae said as he sits down on my couch and drinks his glass of water. 

 

"And you think he just won't ever talk to you again? Trust me I know men. I hooked up with him the week before y'all

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Piranhae07 #1
Chapter 2: Hihiiiii just wanna give some feedback as a fellow author actually ^^; this is the first fic of yours that I'm reading and I really like the flow! But I guess some word of advice... perhaps you could use italic font when it comes to thoughts or message texts. And also use less exclamation marks, question marks and capital letters. To show surprise or horror or shock maybe you could perhaps use: Wide eyed, I yell in shock, "OMG! You scared me!"
Somethin liddat :)

And for time jumps like 10min later etc, perhaps you could have a bit more content in between and say like: As usual I'm always aware of the hot Lee Donghae sitting behind me but the usual lecture is so boring. Luckily it ends in another hour and I quickly pack my things.
Somethin like dis :))

Sorry if anything I say offends you ^^; but as a writer myself, I guess I just see potential in your writing and just wanna help you get better!
LeeLenaMx #2
Chapter 14: This story is so sweet and fluffy! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
OdetteSwan 934 streak #3
Chapter 14: This was such a cute, nervous, exciting first date!
Thank you so much for sharing.
Camomile15 #4
Chapter 14: Will there be any sequel? Or special chap to see ths couple
aishahjs2101 #5
Chapter 13: Finally.. they're confessing .. both of them just too cute...
OdetteSwan 934 streak #6
Chapter 12: An HSM marathon! What could be more appropriate.
Thanks for the update!
OdetteSwan 934 streak #7
Chapter 11: That was a cute situation for Donghae to realize how he feels about Hyukjae.
Thank you so much for the update.
OdetteSwan 934 streak #8
Chapter 10: Thanks for the update.
At least Siwon has a new love interest.
I hope the lip synch does not get Hyuk into trouble with Donghae.
Waiting for your update.
OdetteSwan 934 streak #9
Chapter 9: In the two universities I worked in, the students have lockers. So no worries about lockers.
What is Siwon doing? If he was sorry for leaving Donghae, why does he want to spend time with Hyuk? Or is he trying to stop the growing attraction and affection between Donghae and Hyuk?
I just hope that Hyuk would know how to protect his relationship with Hae.
Thank you so much for the update. Don't let us wait too much unless unavoidable! <3<3<3
Camomile15 #10
Chapter 9: Why i feel siwon wanna mess their relationship
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