Jealousy

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*A FEW WEEKS LATER* HyukJae's POV 

 

"Morning Hae." I said as I laid down my One Piece backpack. 

 

"Morning Hyukkie." Hae said. 

 

"Today class we have a new transfer student. Class welcome Yesung." The teacher said as a new student walked in.

 

"Where is he going to sit?" I whispered to Hae.

 

"Idk." Hae said. 

 

"Hmmm, how about you go and sit by HyukJae?" The teacher said while motioning my to stand up since he didn't know me. 

 

"Ok." Yesung said while walking up to the fest next to me. 

 

"Hello, I'm HyukJae." I said while shaking his hand. 

 

"Hi, I'm Yesung." He said as we both laughed. 

 

Class ended after about 30 more minutes. 

 

"So Yesung, what do you like to do for fun?" I said as me, Hae, Kyuhyun, Sungmin, and Yesung walked to the cafeteria. 

 

"I love to sing!!! I could sing for hours." Yesung said while smiling. 

 

"Me too!!!!" Kyuhyun said. 

 

"Ok Yesung it is right? Don't touch him. He's mine. You can sing with him. But if you dare even look at him with google eyes. I'll kill you." Sungmin said while giving him a death smile. 

 

"I am not yours Sungmin. How many times do we have to go over this?" Kyuhyun said while looking annoyed but then just laughed. 

 

"Ohhhk then." Yesung said. 

 

"So Yesung do you want to come over to my apartment tonight for a while?" I said. But then I felt like something was wrong with Hae. He's normally not this quiet. But I just decided to ignore it. 

 

"Sure, just text me your address. Here's my phone. Put your number in." Yesung said while handing me his phone. 

 

"(457) 123-4567. Sorry I say things out loud while doing something." I said shyly. 

 

"No problem. I do the same thing." Yesung said while laughing. 

 

"No way really? Nobody else that I know does that." I said. 

 

"I do." Hae said. He seemed a little upset. 

 

"Are you ok Hae?" I asked while looking at him. 

 

"Yeah, I'm fine." He said while looking down.  

 

"Ok." I said and left it at that. 

 

It was Friday which meant dance with Hae. I told Yesung to meet me at my house at 6. 

 

"You seemed more quite than usual at lunch and right now. Are you sure your ok?" I said while looking at him. 

 

"Yeah, can we just dance?" He said sounding frustrated. 

 

"S-sure." I said not sure what was wrong with Hae. 

 

Donghae's POV 

 

I don't like it. I don't like him. This Yesung person. He's taking my Hyukkie away from me. Wait my Hyukkie? Since when is he yours? Idk my mind isn't working I can't focus on anything except for all the attention this new comer is getting. I just hope that me and Hyukkie can still hang out tomorrow. 

 

Practice was over and I was driving him home like I always do. 

 

"So, wanna hang out tomorrow?" I said. 

 

"I would but I can't. I have plans to go show Yesung Seoul tomorrow. But you can come with us if you want." Hyukkie said. 

 

"No, I'll let you have him all to yourself." I said knowing I sounded jealous but I didn't care because I was jealous. I mean it's not like I like him, I think. I just miss the way it was this morning. Before Yesung showed up. 

 

"I-I'm sorry. I know we always hang out on Saturdays but me and Yesung just kinda clicked like me and you did when we started hanging out." Hyukkie said. 

 

"He's nothing like you and me." I said trying to calm down. 

 

"Yes I know that but I still want him to feel accepted and that he has friends." Hyukkie said nervously. 

 

I felt a little bad that I made him feel that way. But I couldn't help it. I wanted my Hyukkie back. 

 

"Yeah I know.

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Piranhae07
#1
Chapter 2: Hihiiiii just wanna give some feedback as a fellow author actually ^^; this is the first fic of yours that I'm reading and I really like the flow! But I guess some word of advice... perhaps you could use italic font when it comes to thoughts or message texts. And also use less exclamation marks, question marks and capital letters. To show surprise or horror or shock maybe you could perhaps use: Wide eyed, I yell in shock, "OMG! You scared me!"
Somethin liddat :)

And for time jumps like 10min later etc, perhaps you could have a bit more content in between and say like: As usual I'm always aware of the hot Lee Donghae sitting behind me but the usual lecture is so boring. Luckily it ends in another hour and I quickly pack my things.
Somethin like dis :))

Sorry if anything I say offends you ^^; but as a writer myself, I guess I just see potential in your writing and just wanna help you get better!
LeeLenaMx #2
Chapter 14: This story is so sweet and fluffy! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
OdetteSwan
934 streak #3
Chapter 14: This was such a cute, nervous, exciting first date!
Thank you so much for sharing.
Camomile15 #4
Chapter 14: Will there be any sequel? Or special chap to see ths couple
aishahjs2101 #5
Chapter 13: Finally.. they're confessing .. both of them just too cute...
OdetteSwan
934 streak #6
Chapter 12: An HSM marathon! What could be more appropriate.
Thanks for the update!
OdetteSwan
934 streak #7
Chapter 11: That was a cute situation for Donghae to realize how he feels about Hyukjae.
Thank you so much for the update.
OdetteSwan
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Chapter 10: Thanks for the update.
At least Siwon has a new love interest.
I hope the lip synch does not get Hyuk into trouble with Donghae.
Waiting for your update.
OdetteSwan
934 streak #9
Chapter 9: In the two universities I worked in, the students have lockers. So no worries about lockers.
What is Siwon doing? If he was sorry for leaving Donghae, why does he want to spend time with Hyuk? Or is he trying to stop the growing attraction and affection between Donghae and Hyuk?
I just hope that Hyuk would know how to protect his relationship with Hae.
Thank you so much for the update. Don't let us wait too much unless unavoidable! <3<3<3
Camomile15 #10
Chapter 9: Why i feel siwon wanna mess their relationship