Lip Sync?!

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*FRIDAY NIGHT* Hyukjae's POV 

 

"Hi Siwon." I said as he walked into my apartment. 

 

"Hey, sorry to come over uninvited it's just like I said my parents are on a business trip. 

 

"Oh no it's ok. I get bored sometimes so it's ok." I said. 

 

"So what do you what did you need to tell me?" I asked while looking at him. 

 

"Wellllllll, there is this guy I met while I was away." He said while looking down and blushing. 

 

"Ouuuuuhhhhhh, look who got himself a man." I said while slapping his arm in a playful way. 

 

"Stoooiiippp anyway... his name is Heechul and we met because we had to work with eachother for a while and we just kind of clicked so we went on a date and it just kind of sparked from there." Siwon said while smiling like an idiot. 

 

"Well, well, well. Looks like someone's in looovvveee." I said while poking his arm. 

 

"Ok maybe,.... can we just watch a movie?" Siwon said walking to the couch. 

 

"Ouuuuhhhhh trying to change the subject I see. Ok." I said while sitting next to him on the couch getting into his face. 

 

"So which movie?" Siwon asked. 

 

"Haha, Idk." I said as I laughed and ate the popcorn I had just made. 

 

"Oh how insightful." Siwon said sarcastically. 

 

"Ikr I'm so helpful." I said with sarcasm back. We've dont this since we were friends. We ended up have a hsm (high school musical) marathon. And yes I do have all 3 movies don't judge me. 

 

It was around 10 and Siwon went home. 

 

T: Hyukkie 

F: Hae 

 

I forgot to ask do you want to come over tomorrow? I don't have anything to do and I don't want to leave my house. 

 

T: Hae 

F: Hyukkie 

 

Sure. See you at around 1 ok?

 

T: Hyukkie 

F: Hae 

 

Can't wait. ;D <3 

 

T: Hae 

F: Hyukkie

 

I'm tired. Siwon came over for a couple hours. So I'm going to go to

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Piranhae07
#1
Chapter 2: Hihiiiii just wanna give some feedback as a fellow author actually ^^; this is the first fic of yours that I'm reading and I really like the flow! But I guess some word of advice... perhaps you could use italic font when it comes to thoughts or message texts. And also use less exclamation marks, question marks and capital letters. To show surprise or horror or shock maybe you could perhaps use: Wide eyed, I yell in shock, "OMG! You scared me!"
Somethin liddat :)

And for time jumps like 10min later etc, perhaps you could have a bit more content in between and say like: As usual I'm always aware of the hot Lee Donghae sitting behind me but the usual lecture is so boring. Luckily it ends in another hour and I quickly pack my things.
Somethin like dis :))

Sorry if anything I say offends you ^^; but as a writer myself, I guess I just see potential in your writing and just wanna help you get better!
LeeLenaMx #2
Chapter 14: This story is so sweet and fluffy! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
OdetteSwan
934 streak #3
Chapter 14: This was such a cute, nervous, exciting first date!
Thank you so much for sharing.
Camomile15 #4
Chapter 14: Will there be any sequel? Or special chap to see ths couple
aishahjs2101 #5
Chapter 13: Finally.. they're confessing .. both of them just too cute...
OdetteSwan
934 streak #6
Chapter 12: An HSM marathon! What could be more appropriate.
Thanks for the update!
OdetteSwan
934 streak #7
Chapter 11: That was a cute situation for Donghae to realize how he feels about Hyukjae.
Thank you so much for the update.
OdetteSwan
934 streak #8
Chapter 10: Thanks for the update.
At least Siwon has a new love interest.
I hope the lip synch does not get Hyuk into trouble with Donghae.
Waiting for your update.
OdetteSwan
934 streak #9
Chapter 9: In the two universities I worked in, the students have lockers. So no worries about lockers.
What is Siwon doing? If he was sorry for leaving Donghae, why does he want to spend time with Hyuk? Or is he trying to stop the growing attraction and affection between Donghae and Hyuk?
I just hope that Hyuk would know how to protect his relationship with Hae.
Thank you so much for the update. Don't let us wait too much unless unavoidable! <3<3<3
Camomile15 #10
Chapter 9: Why i feel siwon wanna mess their relationship