What Heart Says

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Description

Twice, the national girl group of South Korea. They have won not only Korea But Japan and USA as well. Those hard-working girls got a lot of love from their fans. Twice is of 8 members in this universe. Nowadays they are busy. Taking a break from group activities but now they have a sub-unit formed by Jihyo, Nayeon, Dahyun and Chaeyoung. Mina and Tzuyu are soloists.

Mina is a popular artist both in her hometown Japan and in Korea as well. One day she meets a fan of her and everything begins to change. What really happened ? Look forward to it 


 

Foreword

Member introductions

Mina

Full Name : Myoui Mina
Age : 20
Date Of Birth : March 24, 1997
Nature : Quiet and shy but very friendly 
About : Black Swan of Twice. Caring for her fans.

Momo

Full Name : Hirai Momo
Age : 21
Date Of Birth : November 9, 1996
Nature : Pabo , slow and ??? 
About : A crazy fan of Twice. To her Mina is her life (?) 

Sudiptac92
I'm finally done with the fic. Sorry it took so long for such a short fic. Thanks to all the reader who read this fic. A big thanks to @likeabulldozer for giving me feedback, fixing my errors and helping me with ideas.
I'll be back with a new one. Soon.

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Juliani_
#1
Chapter 11: Awwww~
Cute ending
chaellax
14 streak #2
Chapter 11: I don’t know why, but your writing style is so beautiful.
I really like how you wrote this story.
I will support you for your future works!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 10: Momo-chan (。•́︿•̀。)
Juliani_
#4
Chapter 9: That's break my heart
Juliani_
#5
Chapter 1: I re-read again, because I forgot the story line
zlnzx_ #6
Chapter 10: Ohh Nooo Momo:(
Juliani_
#7
Chapter 9: Ohh...
ahnhaeju
#8
Chapter 9: Michaeng moment is somehow relatable lol
Asking a wise friend to accompany you to take care of your confusing girlfriend xD

This is a good story, you've written it well. I love the pace. I just hate Momo so much here. The fact that she has a mental illness doesn't really move me (maybe I have a really cold heart anyway). But I can't feel Momo's struggle to have the illness. All I see is just a selfish jerk who doesn't care about other people. The fact that Mina's changed so much into bad-mannered as well makes me hates Momo even more.

I really wanna empathize at her but I can't.

I hope we can see Momo making progress on her health condition. I'm glad Chaeyoung appears and probably will turn Mina back to her common sense, not just blinded by her love to Momo (which is mentally unhealthy as well). At this point, we know how much the two love each other. I hope we can see a romantic happy ending at the end ^^
KeezoShuShu
#9
Chapter 9: :O
zlnzx_ #10
Chapter 9: Aww Poor Momo):