Is this love? [part 3]

What Heart Says
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The next day Momo wakes up quite early. "Ouch" ... Her shoulder hurts. She didn't have proper sleep in car.
She freshens herself and heads out to meet Mina.
Mina was packing her luggage and she hears door-bel.
"Oh it's you." Mina wasn't expecting to see Momo again
"Good morning." Momo greets Mina.
- Come in and have a sit.
- Thanks.
Momo sits in a couch. Chaeyoung also joins them.
"hey! Have breakfast with us." Mina offers.
"Yeah join us." Chaeyoung also tells her.
"My pleasure." Momo accepts the offer. She didn't want  to accept easily because she was still pissed about last night but she is too hungry.

"Sorry about last night. You have to leave like that." Mina apologizes 
"It's okay." Momo accepts her apology
- You live nearby?
- Yes. My relative's house is near your farmhouse. When are you leaving ?
- We already packed our luggage. In a few hours.
"I booked today's flight ticket. But there's a problem. There's only one ticket." Chaeyoung comes and confirms
"That's a problem. Hmmm..." Mina looks a little worried
"I'll go by car. You can go by plane." says Chaeyoung

"Can I say my opinion?" Momo asks 
- Sure
- Why don't you explore the city ? I lived here for a long time so I know every inch of Ulsan. I can be your guide and I'm going to Seoul today as well. I can give you  ride too.
- Not a bad idea.
"Chaeyoung, you go by plane I'll come later." Mina happily agrees.

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Sudiptac92
I'm finally done with the fic. Sorry it took so long for such a short fic. Thanks to all the reader who read this fic. A big thanks to @likeabulldozer for giving me feedback, fixing my errors and helping me with ideas.
I'll be back with a new one. Soon.

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Juliani_
#1
Chapter 11: Awwww~
Cute ending
chaellax
14 streak #2
Chapter 11: I don’t know why, but your writing style is so beautiful.
I really like how you wrote this story.
I will support you for your future works!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 10: Momo-chan (。•́︿•̀。)
Juliani_
#4
Chapter 9: That's break my heart
Juliani_
#5
Chapter 1: I re-read again, because I forgot the story line
zlnzx_ #6
Chapter 10: Ohh Nooo Momo:(
Juliani_
#7
Chapter 9: Ohh...
ahnhaeju
#8
Chapter 9: Michaeng moment is somehow relatable lol
Asking a wise friend to accompany you to take care of your confusing girlfriend xD

This is a good story, you've written it well. I love the pace. I just hate Momo so much here. The fact that she has a mental illness doesn't really move me (maybe I have a really cold heart anyway). But I can't feel Momo's struggle to have the illness. All I see is just a selfish jerk who doesn't care about other people. The fact that Mina's changed so much into bad-mannered as well makes me hates Momo even more.

I really wanna empathize at her but I can't.

I hope we can see Momo making progress on her health condition. I'm glad Chaeyoung appears and probably will turn Mina back to her common sense, not just blinded by her love to Momo (which is mentally unhealthy as well). At this point, we know how much the two love each other. I hope we can see a romantic happy ending at the end ^^
KeezoShuShu
#9
Chapter 9: :O
zlnzx_ #10
Chapter 9: Aww Poor Momo):