The Return [Part 1]

What Heart Says
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Mina comes back from Japan after a week. Her father's surgery went well. She lands in Korea at 9:30 PM. Right after landing she tries to contact Momo. 
Beep Beep....  No answer. 
Mina looks really worried. Why shouldn't she ? She only managed to contact Momo once while staying in Japan. She isn't sure why. Was Momo intentionally avoiding her, Is she still mad ? Or is there something wrong ? Mina gets into her car. She thought for a second she will visit Momo right now, but gives up since it is late. She tries once again but no luck.

It was Momo's mom's birthday 3 days ago. Last time momo told Mina to comeback fast so that they can celebrate it together, but Mina couldn't make it and had to ask Chaeyoung to give her mom a gift, it was a rabbit.
Is that has something to do with this ? "Nah I'm overthinking again." Mina says to herself. She tries to sleep while trying to calm herslef saying I'll visit her tomorrow. 

The next morning Mina sets out to visit Momo. She finds Momo in their yard. She is playing with the rabbit. Mina sighs and feels a bit releaved. She approaches Momo.
But.....
"Who are you?" Momo shouts. Mina gets a bit flustered by the response. 
"Why are you joking, Momo? I missed you for a whole week. You didn't even contact me. What happened? Are you mad at me?" Mina asks being worried but Momo starts screaming all of a sudden.
Momo's mom comes out and takes her inside asap. Mina is still baffled. What just happened....

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Sudiptac92
I'm finally done with the fic. Sorry it took so long for such a short fic. Thanks to all the reader who read this fic. A big thanks to @likeabulldozer for giving me feedback, fixing my errors and helping me with ideas.
I'll be back with a new one. Soon.

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Juliani_
#1
Chapter 11: Awwww~
Cute ending
chaellax
14 streak #2
Chapter 11: I don’t know why, but your writing style is so beautiful.
I really like how you wrote this story.
I will support you for your future works!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 10: Momo-chan (。•́︿•̀。)
Juliani_
#4
Chapter 9: That's break my heart
Juliani_
#5
Chapter 1: I re-read again, because I forgot the story line
zlnzx_ #6
Chapter 10: Ohh Nooo Momo:(
Juliani_
#7
Chapter 9: Ohh...
ahnhaeju
#8
Chapter 9: Michaeng moment is somehow relatable lol
Asking a wise friend to accompany you to take care of your confusing girlfriend xD

This is a good story, you've written it well. I love the pace. I just hate Momo so much here. The fact that she has a mental illness doesn't really move me (maybe I have a really cold heart anyway). But I can't feel Momo's struggle to have the illness. All I see is just a selfish jerk who doesn't care about other people. The fact that Mina's changed so much into bad-mannered as well makes me hates Momo even more.

I really wanna empathize at her but I can't.

I hope we can see Momo making progress on her health condition. I'm glad Chaeyoung appears and probably will turn Mina back to her common sense, not just blinded by her love to Momo (which is mentally unhealthy as well). At this point, we know how much the two love each other. I hope we can see a romantic happy ending at the end ^^
KeezoShuShu
#9
Chapter 9: :O
zlnzx_ #10
Chapter 9: Aww Poor Momo):