The Return [Part 2]

What Heart Says
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Mina opens the door. Thankfully it wasn’t locked from the inside. Momo is sitting on the bed in a crying position. Her eyes are covered by her hands. Hearing the door open she looks up.
"GET OUT." Momo gets up and she looks furious.
"I just want to talk. Why are you mad? What did I do wrong ?"
But momo showed no concern. She went near her dressing table and then She starts throwing everything in front Mina. Mina wasn't ready for this at all. In a minute all the pieces of glass are scattered in front of her. She can't reach Momo anymore. 
Momo's mom comes in immediately and escorts Mina outside. 
Mina is in great shock .
"I told you to leave. Fine I think you have the right to know what is wrong with her ."

"She is mentally unbalanced. It happened 5 years ago. Momo loved her father more than anyone. She was really fond of him he also gave a lot of love to Momo. But he died in a accident 5years ago. Momo was really hurt. So hurt that she lost control over herself. Back then Twice was just a rookie girlgroup. You all just debuted but Momo... She started to like for some reason and her childish heart started to love you with everything. She is now reacting like this because she thought you'll leave her as well. It is her post trauma. Give her some space and time. I can't say for how long. But will you ? Please."
Mina nodded silently. She doesn’t know what to do now. She gets up and leaves quietly.

After reaturning home she gives a ca

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Sudiptac92
I'm finally done with the fic. Sorry it took so long for such a short fic. Thanks to all the reader who read this fic. A big thanks to @likeabulldozer for giving me feedback, fixing my errors and helping me with ideas.
I'll be back with a new one. Soon.

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Juliani_
#1
Chapter 11: Awwww~
Cute ending
chaellax
14 streak #2
Chapter 11: I don’t know why, but your writing style is so beautiful.
I really like how you wrote this story.
I will support you for your future works!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 10: Momo-chan (。•́︿•̀。)
Juliani_
#4
Chapter 9: That's break my heart
Juliani_
#5
Chapter 1: I re-read again, because I forgot the story line
zlnzx_ #6
Chapter 10: Ohh Nooo Momo:(
Juliani_
#7
Chapter 9: Ohh...
ahnhaeju
#8
Chapter 9: Michaeng moment is somehow relatable lol
Asking a wise friend to accompany you to take care of your confusing girlfriend xD

This is a good story, you've written it well. I love the pace. I just hate Momo so much here. The fact that she has a mental illness doesn't really move me (maybe I have a really cold heart anyway). But I can't feel Momo's struggle to have the illness. All I see is just a selfish jerk who doesn't care about other people. The fact that Mina's changed so much into bad-mannered as well makes me hates Momo even more.

I really wanna empathize at her but I can't.

I hope we can see Momo making progress on her health condition. I'm glad Chaeyoung appears and probably will turn Mina back to her common sense, not just blinded by her love to Momo (which is mentally unhealthy as well). At this point, we know how much the two love each other. I hope we can see a romantic happy ending at the end ^^
KeezoShuShu
#9
Chapter 9: :O
zlnzx_ #10
Chapter 9: Aww Poor Momo):