Lies [Part 1]

What Heart Says
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Mina and Momo came to Seoul together.
The next morning Mina woke up pretty early. The first thing she did after waking up is calling Momo. But her cellphone is switched off. What could be the reason Mina wonders. She calls in Momo's home telephone. A middle aged woman picks up the phone.
"Hello, Who is it?" that mysterious woman asks.
"I'm Mina. Can you give the phone to Momo?" Mina asks politely.
- She's sleeping. She was very exhausted last night. I'll call you when she wakes up.
- Ah ok.
Probably very tired. Mina thinks.
She washes her face and freshens herself. Takes her break-fast. 
8:15 it is right now. Mina gives Momo another call. Still switched of so she tries the landphone number.
"Hello, Who is it?" that woman picks up the phone again.
- It's me , Mina." Is Momo still sleeping?
- Yes. Call later. I'll inform you as soon as she wakes up.
That woman hangs up.
Weird woman. Mina goes to shower and does some vocal practice. One hour passes.
Mina calls again.
"Hello, it's me. Is Momo there?"
-I told you I'll inform YOU. Stop bothering.
And she hangs up.
Mina was getting restless. She calls immediately again
"Hey ! How dare you are? How can you just hang me? Give the phone to Momo. I have to talk to me? Give Mina is pissed 
- Hey Kid. Show some respect. Do you know who I am? Don't call here again.
- I know exactly who you are. Probably a maid or someone

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Sudiptac92
I'm finally done with the fic. Sorry it took so long for such a short fic. Thanks to all the reader who read this fic. A big thanks to @likeabulldozer for giving me feedback, fixing my errors and helping me with ideas.
I'll be back with a new one. Soon.

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Juliani_
#1
Chapter 11: Awwww~
Cute ending
chaellax
14 streak #2
Chapter 11: I don’t know why, but your writing style is so beautiful.
I really like how you wrote this story.
I will support you for your future works!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 10: Momo-chan (。•́︿•̀。)
Juliani_
#4
Chapter 9: That's break my heart
Juliani_
#5
Chapter 1: I re-read again, because I forgot the story line
zlnzx_ #6
Chapter 10: Ohh Nooo Momo:(
Juliani_
#7
Chapter 9: Ohh...
ahnhaeju
#8
Chapter 9: Michaeng moment is somehow relatable lol
Asking a wise friend to accompany you to take care of your confusing girlfriend xD

This is a good story, you've written it well. I love the pace. I just hate Momo so much here. The fact that she has a mental illness doesn't really move me (maybe I have a really cold heart anyway). But I can't feel Momo's struggle to have the illness. All I see is just a selfish jerk who doesn't care about other people. The fact that Mina's changed so much into bad-mannered as well makes me hates Momo even more.

I really wanna empathize at her but I can't.

I hope we can see Momo making progress on her health condition. I'm glad Chaeyoung appears and probably will turn Mina back to her common sense, not just blinded by her love to Momo (which is mentally unhealthy as well). At this point, we know how much the two love each other. I hope we can see a romantic happy ending at the end ^^
KeezoShuShu
#9
Chapter 9: :O
zlnzx_ #10
Chapter 9: Aww Poor Momo):