Is this love? [part 2]

What Heart Says
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Momo reaches Mina's house. Huh there is a lock on main-gate. Momo wonders around. And she finds the watchman coming from outside. Probably went outside to walk around.
Momo asks, "Where is Mina?"
The watchman says, "She's not in town. Went to Ulsan for concert."
-Really?
-What kind of fan are you ? Don't even know where your idol is?
Momo walks back and gets in her car. She thinks for a few second and then starts the engine and asks navigation for Ulsan. She's going to Ulsan to attend the concert.

 

There was heavy traffic today. So it took almost 3 hours for her to reach. It's already 9 PM. When she attended the concert it was almost ending. Mina was about to sing the last song to wrap it up.
Mina takes the microphone and says, "this will be the last song. Thanks you everyone for enjoying. Thank you for all those loves."
Mina starts to sing. It's What heart says. The ballad song that is her best hit so far. Toping gaon chart for 8 weeks and staying on top 5 for 24 weeks.

Momo luckily got a seat in 2nd row. And she's amazed by Mina's awesome vocal. She was humming and totally lost herself in music.
The concert ended and everyone clapped happily. Mina was so touched. She decided to do an autograph session after the concert.
Momo is still lost humming in a corner. And Chaeyoung approaches towards her.
"Hey! who are you?" Chaeyoung asks Momo. But Momo didn't answer.
Chaeyoung asks again a little louder and Mo

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Sudiptac92
I'm finally done with the fic. Sorry it took so long for such a short fic. Thanks to all the reader who read this fic. A big thanks to @likeabulldozer for giving me feedback, fixing my errors and helping me with ideas.
I'll be back with a new one. Soon.

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Juliani_
#1
Chapter 11: Awwww~
Cute ending
chaellax
14 streak #2
Chapter 11: I don’t know why, but your writing style is so beautiful.
I really like how you wrote this story.
I will support you for your future works!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 10: Momo-chan (。•́︿•̀。)
Juliani_
#4
Chapter 9: That's break my heart
Juliani_
#5
Chapter 1: I re-read again, because I forgot the story line
zlnzx_ #6
Chapter 10: Ohh Nooo Momo:(
Juliani_
#7
Chapter 9: Ohh...
ahnhaeju
#8
Chapter 9: Michaeng moment is somehow relatable lol
Asking a wise friend to accompany you to take care of your confusing girlfriend xD

This is a good story, you've written it well. I love the pace. I just hate Momo so much here. The fact that she has a mental illness doesn't really move me (maybe I have a really cold heart anyway). But I can't feel Momo's struggle to have the illness. All I see is just a selfish jerk who doesn't care about other people. The fact that Mina's changed so much into bad-mannered as well makes me hates Momo even more.

I really wanna empathize at her but I can't.

I hope we can see Momo making progress on her health condition. I'm glad Chaeyoung appears and probably will turn Mina back to her common sense, not just blinded by her love to Momo (which is mentally unhealthy as well). At this point, we know how much the two love each other. I hope we can see a romantic happy ending at the end ^^
KeezoShuShu
#9
Chapter 9: :O
zlnzx_ #10
Chapter 9: Aww Poor Momo):