Lies [Part 2]

What Heart Says
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Momo opened the door in the afternoon. She has broken half things in her room. It's a mess.
Her mom comes and asks, "You okay?" 
"I'm okay." Momo says. She goes to the balcony. She gives Mina a call. But Mina keeps hanging her up. But Momo is stubborn.

Mina is on her way to home after the meeting with Twice members and CEO. She was getting frustrated after receiving so many call. She parks her car and receives the call.
"What do you want?" Mina yells.
"Please forgive me. I can't leave without you. Please." Momo is begging but Mina is not convinced.
- Go to hell. I don't care.
- You didn't love me a bit ? Tell me.... I'll really kill myself if you continue this.
Hearing that Mina hangs up.
Momo is heart broken 

 

At night Mina gets another call from Momo. It's 9:11 pm.
Mina receives the call.
"Are you deaf?" she said that but she hears weird sound.
"I'm giving you 30 minutes. Come here or I'll kill myself. If you love me a little come here." Momo is crying and her voice is deep. Mina can hear her heavy breathings as if Momo is right next to her. 
"Are you made? It's late. Go sleep." But Momo's crying was getting faint every seconds and she hears a dropping sound. Probably Momo dropped her phone.
"Hello ... Hello .. Momo ?"

Mina rushes to her car. She sets off. She is driving crazily around 70-80 Kmph.
She reaches Momo's house in 20 minutes.

It's dark. Momo's mom isn't home probab

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Sudiptac92
I'm finally done with the fic. Sorry it took so long for such a short fic. Thanks to all the reader who read this fic. A big thanks to @likeabulldozer for giving me feedback, fixing my errors and helping me with ideas.
I'll be back with a new one. Soon.

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Juliani_
#1
Chapter 11: Awwww~
Cute ending
chaellax
14 streak #2
Chapter 11: I don’t know why, but your writing style is so beautiful.
I really like how you wrote this story.
I will support you for your future works!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 10: Momo-chan (。•́︿•̀。)
Juliani_
#4
Chapter 9: That's break my heart
Juliani_
#5
Chapter 1: I re-read again, because I forgot the story line
zlnzx_ #6
Chapter 10: Ohh Nooo Momo:(
Juliani_
#7
Chapter 9: Ohh...
ahnhaeju
#8
Chapter 9: Michaeng moment is somehow relatable lol
Asking a wise friend to accompany you to take care of your confusing girlfriend xD

This is a good story, you've written it well. I love the pace. I just hate Momo so much here. The fact that she has a mental illness doesn't really move me (maybe I have a really cold heart anyway). But I can't feel Momo's struggle to have the illness. All I see is just a selfish jerk who doesn't care about other people. The fact that Mina's changed so much into bad-mannered as well makes me hates Momo even more.

I really wanna empathize at her but I can't.

I hope we can see Momo making progress on her health condition. I'm glad Chaeyoung appears and probably will turn Mina back to her common sense, not just blinded by her love to Momo (which is mentally unhealthy as well). At this point, we know how much the two love each other. I hope we can see a romantic happy ending at the end ^^
KeezoShuShu
#9
Chapter 9: :O
zlnzx_ #10
Chapter 9: Aww Poor Momo):