A Date To Remember

What Heart Says
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"Hello, Momo. Why calling so late ?" Mina gets a phone from Momo at late night.
"I want to discuss something." Momo says
- Ehhh!?! What is it?
- Let's go on a date. We have not gone to any.
- Oh that's a good idea. I was thinking that too. Where should we go?
- Han river? Or Amusement park? 
- Han River sounds fun but not in amusement park. I can't ride scary rides.
- Oh right! Me too. I forgot I have fear of those rides too. How about a park ?
- But those are always populated.
- Ok let's go to park first if we find a quiet park we can enjoy and later may be to Han river as well.
- Ok . Settled then. See you tomorrow. Good night. Love you sweetie. Chu
- Love you too. Chu chu

 

The next day Mina picks Momo from her house and goes for the park.
"It's our first date. Let's make it special so that we can remember this day forever." Momo says
"Yeah I'll make sure of that" Mina enjoyingly drives 

They reach the park in no time. So they didn't get to talk much. The park is quiet which is quite surprising. Not many people around.


After getting of the car Momo rushes for balloons. So childish Mina wonders .
Momo poking balloons one after another and bursting one after another.
Mina keeps looking at Momo.
Momo silently comes to Mina and pops one near Mina's year. Mina is shocked to death. She was dazed so she didn't notice. And the childish laugh of Momo.

They go for a walk under shaded road. Some fans recognize Mina and comes for autograph. Mina was gladly giving them but Momo was unhappy. She grabs Mina's hand and says no autograph here. "Focus on me only" Momo uses her ageyo.
Mina blushes shyly, "Ok Ok."

A date under peaceful nature. The wind is blowing softly and Mina is leaning her head on Momo's shoulder. 
"We will always be together." Mina says .

Next they get ready for Han River. Mina has visited this place before with Chaeyoung. 
But Mina gets a call.
- Hello. Who is this ?
- I

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Sudiptac92
I'm finally done with the fic. Sorry it took so long for such a short fic. Thanks to all the reader who read this fic. A big thanks to @likeabulldozer for giving me feedback, fixing my errors and helping me with ideas.
I'll be back with a new one. Soon.

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Juliani_
#1
Chapter 11: Awwww~
Cute ending
chaellax
14 streak #2
Chapter 11: I don’t know why, but your writing style is so beautiful.
I really like how you wrote this story.
I will support you for your future works!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 10: Momo-chan (。•́︿•̀。)
Juliani_
#4
Chapter 9: That's break my heart
Juliani_
#5
Chapter 1: I re-read again, because I forgot the story line
zlnzx_ #6
Chapter 10: Ohh Nooo Momo:(
Juliani_
#7
Chapter 9: Ohh...
ahnhaeju
#8
Chapter 9: Michaeng moment is somehow relatable lol
Asking a wise friend to accompany you to take care of your confusing girlfriend xD

This is a good story, you've written it well. I love the pace. I just hate Momo so much here. The fact that she has a mental illness doesn't really move me (maybe I have a really cold heart anyway). But I can't feel Momo's struggle to have the illness. All I see is just a selfish jerk who doesn't care about other people. The fact that Mina's changed so much into bad-mannered as well makes me hates Momo even more.

I really wanna empathize at her but I can't.

I hope we can see Momo making progress on her health condition. I'm glad Chaeyoung appears and probably will turn Mina back to her common sense, not just blinded by her love to Momo (which is mentally unhealthy as well). At this point, we know how much the two love each other. I hope we can see a romantic happy ending at the end ^^
KeezoShuShu
#9
Chapter 9: :O
zlnzx_ #10
Chapter 9: Aww Poor Momo):