Is this love ? [part 1]

What Heart Says
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Ding Dong

Someone knocking. Mina gets up and opens the door. Oh it's her best friend Chaeyoung. She wanted to meet with her. Both of them are very busy promoting themselves.So what brings Chaeyoung here.

 

"Hello. How's life?" Chaeyoung asks delightfully.
"Got some time to rest so using it.You" Mina smiles
"Fine you can say." A typical reply from Chaeyoung 
"What brings you here? You're quite busy" Mina asks
- To check how my best friend is doing and a request as well. Good to hear you're doing good. Anything new?
- Nah nothing new but I'm enjoying my leisure. What request you want to make ?
- I'm sorry if I bothered you in your off time. I've a very close friend in Ulsan. I told you about him. Well the thing is he asked me something. He wants do
 a mini concert and he wants you to perform. It's a charity function for some orphans.
- I see... Ok done. I'm gonna perform. I'll get to travel a little as well. When is the concert ?
"Really?" Chaeyoung beams with a joy. "It's in Friday. You have 4 days."
"Hmmm. Ok "
"I'll stay those 4 days with you. Do you mind?"
"Oh why would I? It'll be great to get some company." Mina seems really happy. This girl really gets happy easily.

It's Thursday night. Mina is packing her back. Chaeyoung is helping her too.
"Which song will you sing?" Chaeyoung asks.
"I've one in my mind.Wait for it. It's a secret" Mina gives her sweet smile
Chaeyoung wonders.

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Sudiptac92
I'm finally done with the fic. Sorry it took so long for such a short fic. Thanks to all the reader who read this fic. A big thanks to @likeabulldozer for giving me feedback, fixing my errors and helping me with ideas.
I'll be back with a new one. Soon.

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Juliani_
#1
Chapter 11: Awwww~
Cute ending
chaellax
14 streak #2
Chapter 11: I don’t know why, but your writing style is so beautiful.
I really like how you wrote this story.
I will support you for your future works!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 10: Momo-chan (。•́︿•̀。)
Juliani_
#4
Chapter 9: That's break my heart
Juliani_
#5
Chapter 1: I re-read again, because I forgot the story line
zlnzx_ #6
Chapter 10: Ohh Nooo Momo:(
Juliani_
#7
Chapter 9: Ohh...
ahnhaeju
#8
Chapter 9: Michaeng moment is somehow relatable lol
Asking a wise friend to accompany you to take care of your confusing girlfriend xD

This is a good story, you've written it well. I love the pace. I just hate Momo so much here. The fact that she has a mental illness doesn't really move me (maybe I have a really cold heart anyway). But I can't feel Momo's struggle to have the illness. All I see is just a selfish jerk who doesn't care about other people. The fact that Mina's changed so much into bad-mannered as well makes me hates Momo even more.

I really wanna empathize at her but I can't.

I hope we can see Momo making progress on her health condition. I'm glad Chaeyoung appears and probably will turn Mina back to her common sense, not just blinded by her love to Momo (which is mentally unhealthy as well). At this point, we know how much the two love each other. I hope we can see a romantic happy ending at the end ^^
KeezoShuShu
#9
Chapter 9: :O
zlnzx_ #10
Chapter 9: Aww Poor Momo):