An awkward meeting

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Mina came home from shopping. She looks a little bewildered. There is someone in the yard. Probably a fan, but it's middle of noon . At this time here? She wonders. Huh whatever she has to take care for this fan now.

 

Mina goes to the yard and sees a young girl. Almost her age. She asks, "Hello, How can I help you?"
The mysterious girl says, "My name is Momo. I’m your biggest fan. I came here to listen to your singing."
-Please come later. I'm busy rn.
-No I want it rn. 
-Try to understand. 
Mina starts to get pissed but Momo is quite stubborn and keeps asking.

 

"Do you know how much hardship we go through. You fans just keep coming and ask for autographs and stuff. WE'RE HUMAN TOO. GET OUT RIGHT NOW." Mina explodes. She is a quiet peace loving girl, but she was really pissed.

 

Momo looked dazed for a few seconds and then went to her car. She opens the car and comes back with a bucket of flower. She gives it to Mina
"Happy Birthday, Mina." Says Momo with a smile.
Mina is kinda uncomfortable. She was just mad at Momo and now she's receiving a birthday wish from Momo.
Momo adds "I came to celebrate your birthday and just to spend time with you." She begins to cry .
"Today is my mom's death anniversary as well. I wanted to feel better. So I came to listen to your singing. Sorry." 

 

Mina is mazed. She feels really sorry for her. "I'm sorry. I didn't know. I apologize for my

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Sudiptac92
I'm finally done with the fic. Sorry it took so long for such a short fic. Thanks to all the reader who read this fic. A big thanks to @likeabulldozer for giving me feedback, fixing my errors and helping me with ideas.
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Juliani_
#1
Chapter 11: Awwww~
Cute ending
chaellax
14 streak #2
Chapter 11: I don’t know why, but your writing style is so beautiful.
I really like how you wrote this story.
I will support you for your future works!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 10: Momo-chan (。•́︿•̀。)
Juliani_
#4
Chapter 9: That's break my heart
Juliani_
#5
Chapter 1: I re-read again, because I forgot the story line
zlnzx_ #6
Chapter 10: Ohh Nooo Momo:(
Juliani_
#7
Chapter 9: Ohh...
ahnhaeju
#8
Chapter 9: Michaeng moment is somehow relatable lol
Asking a wise friend to accompany you to take care of your confusing girlfriend xD

This is a good story, you've written it well. I love the pace. I just hate Momo so much here. The fact that she has a mental illness doesn't really move me (maybe I have a really cold heart anyway). But I can't feel Momo's struggle to have the illness. All I see is just a selfish jerk who doesn't care about other people. The fact that Mina's changed so much into bad-mannered as well makes me hates Momo even more.

I really wanna empathize at her but I can't.

I hope we can see Momo making progress on her health condition. I'm glad Chaeyoung appears and probably will turn Mina back to her common sense, not just blinded by her love to Momo (which is mentally unhealthy as well). At this point, we know how much the two love each other. I hope we can see a romantic happy ending at the end ^^
KeezoShuShu
#9
Chapter 9: :O
zlnzx_ #10
Chapter 9: Aww Poor Momo):