When You Love Someone

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Description

This story is inspired by Day6 song - When You Love Someone

I hope this story will bring a little light when you feel bored^^

Enjoy

I am very new to this and writing is my new hobby. I am not perfect so please help me review my story so it can be perfect.

Thank you so much ^^

 

This story will focus more on the main character P.O.V and has narration part.

It will be a little confusing and if you have something that maybe you don't understand, you can message me or ask it in the comment below.

Foreword

"It feels strange when you love someone~"

"When you love someone, you want to be there for them. You are willing to be the one who gets hurt and be the one who lives in dark."

"That's when you love someone~"

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KrisBwi #1
Chapter 16: I reaaly want more of this story. Especially im shipping jae with hanbyul. And your story gives a lot of cliffhanger, really. But overall i still like this story.
KrisBwi #2
Chapter 16: I reaaly want more of this story. Especially im shipping jae with hanbyul. And your story gives a lot of cliffhanger, really. But overall i still like this story.
KrisBwi #3
Chapter 1: Im just starting with the story but this is really getting me the feels coz i can relate. And i hate falling inlove like this. ???
baedan_ #4
Chapter 16: This is my first time to read a short paragraph style but your words moved me and I could feel the same, as hurt as Hanbyul.
I wish Jae had a good life with Hanbyul but what made me smiling is the fact Hanbyul tried to contact him again. Thank you for the story. This is so beautiful
Fuggy123 #5
It's absolutely true.... When u really love someone that person's happiness is the only thing that matters n we always have the fear to loose that one.... I m agree with ur thoughts
MustMakeIt #6
Chapter 16: Oh my sorry for being late in reading and commenting but that's because I was writing my story too and also, life kept me busy, I absolutely loved the way you write about the feelings of the POV of the author. I see that you've included paragraphing towards the later chapters and seriously it got better and better . Last but not least, such a touching story. It was heart wrenching and touching . So happy she had a successful exhibition and wow i can understand how she felt about not wanting to hurt Jae and her love for Young K believe me i've felt being on the receiving and giving end at the same time so i feel her (the pov of the main character here) ....well done and look forward to your next story!!!!! Hugs xoxo
avoire #7
Chapter 16: this is so heartbreaking omg :"((((((
PinkBlueBeauty #8
Chapter 16: It's sad, yet beautiful what happened to Jae. Hope the best friends talk to each other again.
PinkBlueBeauty #9
Chapter 15: The style of your paragraphs is new too me, but I like it. It's refreshing.
PinkBlueBeauty #10
Chapter 14: Her art is beautiful, even though I couldn't see it directly, I saw it through your words. It was meaningful and special. Also, her fashion style is great.
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