Part 1

When You Love Someone
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P.O.V

Do you ever fall in love with someone? How do you feel? Does your heart also beat fast just like me?

My name is Park Hanbyul and I am 23 years old. And I am in love. 

For 23 years I am alive, I never feel this happy. 

It is not easy to understand but yeah I am madly in love. 

I am in love with him since I was 15 years old. The reason why I fall in love with him is really simple and that reason hasn't changed at all...

I love him because he is who he is. He never tries to changes himself to be like someone else. He is happy with the way he is. 

I also love his passion for music. He loves music and he is now pursuing music. Not as a singer or idol but he likes to do street busking or sometimes some he performs at school or sometimes at a cafe. 

He doesn't have a great personality but that makes me fall in love with him. He looks cold outside but when you know him, he has this "spring" feels. He takes care of you with his own style. 

I love the way he talks to me. We don't use a formal word like other do but we speak like a friend who knows each other well. I love the way he looks at me. The looks that he truly cares for me. I love the way he smiles. By looking at his smiling face, I can end my day with a smile too. 

See, I am truly in love with him. 

We know each other for 8 years now but nothing changes my feeling. I still love him more than I love myself.

Ironically, the man that I am deeply in love with never knows my feeling.

The man that I deeply in love with.. Are deeply in love with someone else. 

The man that I love with all my heart is deeply in love with my older sister. Yeah, my real older sister,

He loves my sister more than anything else in this world. They are a happy couple who love each other more than anything in this world. 

The one that sits on my left side wearing a one-piece yellow dress

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KrisBwi #1
Chapter 16: I reaaly want more of this story. Especially im shipping jae with hanbyul. And your story gives a lot of cliffhanger, really. But overall i still like this story.
KrisBwi #2
Chapter 16: I reaaly want more of this story. Especially im shipping jae with hanbyul. And your story gives a lot of cliffhanger, really. But overall i still like this story.
KrisBwi #3
Chapter 1: Im just starting with the story but this is really getting me the feels coz i can relate. And i hate falling inlove like this. ???
baedan_ #4
Chapter 16: This is my first time to read a short paragraph style but your words moved me and I could feel the same, as hurt as Hanbyul.
I wish Jae had a good life with Hanbyul but what made me smiling is the fact Hanbyul tried to contact him again. Thank you for the story. This is so beautiful
Fuggy123
#5
It's absolutely true.... When u really love someone that person's happiness is the only thing that matters n we always have the fear to loose that one.... I m agree with ur thoughts
MustMakeIt
#6
Chapter 16: Oh my sorry for being late in reading and commenting but that's because I was writing my story too and also, life kept me busy, I absolutely loved the way you write about the feelings of the POV of the author. I see that you've included paragraphing towards the later chapters and seriously it got better and better . Last but not least, such a touching story. It was heart wrenching and touching . So happy she had a successful exhibition and wow i can understand how she felt about not wanting to hurt Jae and her love for Young K believe me i've felt being on the receiving and giving end at the same time so i feel her (the pov of the main character here) ....well done and look forward to your next story!!!!! Hugs xoxo
avoire #7
Chapter 16: this is so heartbreaking omg :"((((((
PinkBlueBeauty
#8
Chapter 16: It's sad, yet beautiful what happened to Jae. Hope the best friends talk to each other again.
PinkBlueBeauty
#9
Chapter 15: The style of your paragraphs is new too me, but I like it. It's refreshing.
PinkBlueBeauty
#10
Chapter 14: Her art is beautiful, even though I couldn't see it directly, I saw it through your words. It was meaningful and special. Also, her fashion style is great.