Special Part

When You Love Someone
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Hello all^^

First I want to thanks, all of you for reading and sharing upvote for this story^^

Thanks for subscribing my story too^^ I hope all of you that read this story enjoy it^^

"When You Love Someone" has ended with 14 Parts ^^

 

I am now still thinking about 2 things...

First is to make a new story and the other one is to write Jae's story after Hanbyul goes to Paris...

I am still unsure about that^^

What do you guys think?

Should I do Jae's one or just write a new one??

 

For the new story, who do you guys want the main will be??

For me, maybe I will do either Exo or Bts... But still not sure.

 

These past few days, I am learning about grammar haha :D

Some of you guys might be wondering why I like to write words per words and not paragraphs.

It is because I think if I write it per words, it makes it looks like we are thinking. 

And it is easier to make us visualises it. 

Like for example: 

My P.O.V

I look at him with wondering eyes.

Why is he looking at her like that?

I don't know why, but I don't like it.

For me, it looks easier to understand what someone P.O.V seems like

 

But after some of you guys recommending me to write in paragraphs, I try it and actually I like it too^^

I can describe more about the situation so I will try to combine that both style. 

 

This is the first time I write a story and upload it online like this.

At first, I feel a little bit nervous because I don't know if everyone will like it or not 

But that is it... Everyone has a different thought and different perspective. 

Some people might like it and someone people might not.

After thinking about it, I decided to try it. 

 

After reading some comments and story reviews, I realise how much I am still lacking.

I really have a fun time reading all of your comments. 

It gives me the courage to write more.

All of you help me to see the other side of me. 

I really appreciate it^^

 

Now it is the time to answer some of your question^^ They will be an answer from story perspective and My answer as a writer perspective^^

- For the part where the sister is pregnant or not...

Ans: Actually, Saebyul thinks that she and Young K did something wrong when they are drunk but from what Young K know, they did not do anything. 

My Ans: Yes, that's right... They never do something. Young

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KrisBwi #1
Chapter 16: I reaaly want more of this story. Especially im shipping jae with hanbyul. And your story gives a lot of cliffhanger, really. But overall i still like this story.
KrisBwi #2
Chapter 16: I reaaly want more of this story. Especially im shipping jae with hanbyul. And your story gives a lot of cliffhanger, really. But overall i still like this story.
KrisBwi #3
Chapter 1: Im just starting with the story but this is really getting me the feels coz i can relate. And i hate falling inlove like this. ???
baedan_ #4
Chapter 16: This is my first time to read a short paragraph style but your words moved me and I could feel the same, as hurt as Hanbyul.
I wish Jae had a good life with Hanbyul but what made me smiling is the fact Hanbyul tried to contact him again. Thank you for the story. This is so beautiful
Fuggy123
#5
It's absolutely true.... When u really love someone that person's happiness is the only thing that matters n we always have the fear to loose that one.... I m agree with ur thoughts
MustMakeIt
#6
Chapter 16: Oh my sorry for being late in reading and commenting but that's because I was writing my story too and also, life kept me busy, I absolutely loved the way you write about the feelings of the POV of the author. I see that you've included paragraphing towards the later chapters and seriously it got better and better . Last but not least, such a touching story. It was heart wrenching and touching . So happy she had a successful exhibition and wow i can understand how she felt about not wanting to hurt Jae and her love for Young K believe me i've felt being on the receiving and giving end at the same time so i feel her (the pov of the main character here) ....well done and look forward to your next story!!!!! Hugs xoxo
avoire #7
Chapter 16: this is so heartbreaking omg :"((((((
PinkBlueBeauty
#8
Chapter 16: It's sad, yet beautiful what happened to Jae. Hope the best friends talk to each other again.
PinkBlueBeauty
#9
Chapter 15: The style of your paragraphs is new too me, but I like it. It's refreshing.
PinkBlueBeauty
#10
Chapter 14: Her art is beautiful, even though I couldn't see it directly, I saw it through your words. It was meaningful and special. Also, her fashion style is great.