Part 9

When You Love Someone
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I close the bedroom door and go to the living room. 

I can't think of anything else. This is the only way to help Hanbyul to get out her stress. 

I hope by giving a chance for her to write the lyrics will help her ease her pain.

 

I feel someone sitting beside of me. 

"Are you awake?" Hanbyul asks me with her tired voice. 

I rub my eyes and smiles at her. 

 

"Are you hungry?"  I asked her and she shakes her head. 

"Do you want to go somewhere?" I asked and she shakes her head again. 

She hands me my laptop and goes back to the bedroom. 

 

I read the lyrics something hits me really hard. 

She writes about her feeling. 

I go into the room and again. She sits in the corner and looks out the window. 

She looks so pale and seems like she is going to faint anytime.

 

"Byul ahh... You need to eat." I said but she doesn't answer me. 

"You have been like this since 3 days ago. You need to eat if not you will faint." I said but still, Hanbyul doesn't even move a little. 

I sit next to her and she cries again. Everytime the tears fall, she wipes it.

 

I really don't know what should I do. All I can is just stay beside her. 

I am afraid to leave her alone. I am afraid that she will do something stupid. 

 

And 3 days passed. The only thing that she did is sits and crying. 

Every time I fed her, she will eat a little and then throw up.

 

"Byul ahh... Can you please eat a little." I am really worried about her condition.

Her lip is so dry and her face looks so pale. 

For this past 3 days, Young K and Saebyul

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KrisBwi #1
Chapter 16: I reaaly want more of this story. Especially im shipping jae with hanbyul. And your story gives a lot of cliffhanger, really. But overall i still like this story.
KrisBwi #2
Chapter 16: I reaaly want more of this story. Especially im shipping jae with hanbyul. And your story gives a lot of cliffhanger, really. But overall i still like this story.
KrisBwi #3
Chapter 1: Im just starting with the story but this is really getting me the feels coz i can relate. And i hate falling inlove like this. ???
baedan_ #4
Chapter 16: This is my first time to read a short paragraph style but your words moved me and I could feel the same, as hurt as Hanbyul.
I wish Jae had a good life with Hanbyul but what made me smiling is the fact Hanbyul tried to contact him again. Thank you for the story. This is so beautiful
Fuggy123
#5
It's absolutely true.... When u really love someone that person's happiness is the only thing that matters n we always have the fear to loose that one.... I m agree with ur thoughts
MustMakeIt
#6
Chapter 16: Oh my sorry for being late in reading and commenting but that's because I was writing my story too and also, life kept me busy, I absolutely loved the way you write about the feelings of the POV of the author. I see that you've included paragraphing towards the later chapters and seriously it got better and better . Last but not least, such a touching story. It was heart wrenching and touching . So happy she had a successful exhibition and wow i can understand how she felt about not wanting to hurt Jae and her love for Young K believe me i've felt being on the receiving and giving end at the same time so i feel her (the pov of the main character here) ....well done and look forward to your next story!!!!! Hugs xoxo
avoire #7
Chapter 16: this is so heartbreaking omg :"((((((
PinkBlueBeauty
#8
Chapter 16: It's sad, yet beautiful what happened to Jae. Hope the best friends talk to each other again.
PinkBlueBeauty
#9
Chapter 15: The style of your paragraphs is new too me, but I like it. It's refreshing.
PinkBlueBeauty
#10
Chapter 14: Her art is beautiful, even though I couldn't see it directly, I saw it through your words. It was meaningful and special. Also, her fashion style is great.