I wish I could tell you

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I never wanted to hurt you, so I hid everything from you. But now, things are getting worse, and I don't know how long I can hold on.

But I can't tell anyone the truth, not even you. I know the truth you hide from me, I knew it for a long time. Now I am starting to get hurt by it. I don't know who to chose, nothing is how it should be, I ain't myself... I haven't been for a long time.

"Your the worse, if this is the real you."

"I'm sorry, if it's my fault your hurting."

"Don't mention his name, thinking of him makes me so mad!"

"Forget me, you already have someone, I will only get in the way."

"What is making you suffer like this!?"

Someone, help me... I am scared. I'm so scared. I can't go on like this, seeing you hurts me more. I want it to stop, why does it hurt so much? Help me, it hurts, I don't want to move.

Help, I'm scared.

Foreword

Hello everyone, this is my first fanfic, I made it for my friend cause she wanted me too. It is very short, she liked it and she told me to post it online, so I did. There are two endings just so you know.

And please be nice, if you don't like it that's okay, tell me but don't be rude about it, this is my first fanfic remember, I will get better... hopefully.

Anyway, I hope you like it, please tell me how it was. Thank you.

Thanks to RockerChickz for the poster. ^^ I love it.

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Stardust1004
#1
@chattykitkat I had mixed feelings about it too, but I made it for my friend so I let her read it, she liked it and told me to put it AFF, so I did. lol
chattykitkat
#2
I have mixed feelings right now, it's just ugh. But great story!
ChocolateCookie
#3
I like the 2nd ending more kekeke^^ I don´t like bad endings but it´s really interesting seeing both sides of a story! Well, I love that story a lot^^ Good work^^
Stardust1004
#4
@ChocolateCookie I am updating right now, the story is already finished I just have to upload it all, I can't add it all tonight though cause it is 6:30 AM and I haven't went to sleep yet. lol
ChocolateCookie
#5
Very interesting^^ Update soon!