questions` for me to improve

let me be your white prince ♥

sorry, this is not an update, but i need your help to improve

please, can all readers answer the following and post it on my wall as a private message

1. am i dragging the story to long?

2. Is my writing style okay?

3. am i confusing you?

4. are there too many things happening at the same time?

5. am i not making things clear?

6. should i add in povs from the boys?

so pleasee tell mee, all readers, i really want to improve!!!

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shinyiuhan #1
hahaha that was sooo funny. i'm so excited :)
Elatte #2
hey you're writing a sequel...<br />
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Myung-DaeLEE62497 #3
WOOOOhhhoooo!~ i'm so excited!!!!!! oh yeah~ oh yeah~ Sequel!! That's what i'm talking about baby! yeah!!!!!!! omo! FOREVER ROYALTY~ ^^ hwaiting!
Yeonnie #4
Poor Minho x)
shinyiuhan #5
haha yeah. i still have to read the rest of memorybox, have a lot of catching up to do. forgive your umma!!! i missed you too!
everlasting_flame #6
@f_mama; oh come on, don't pretend that you didn't expect no minho in the ending<br />
@shinyiuhan; neeeeh umma Eunoi!! hahahaha, ssooorrry made you choke hahahah<br />
well I didn't want to put minho...cause he is majorly in my other fanfic already, wanna give henry a fair go as well hahaha<br />
awwwww I miss you loads umma!
shinyiuhan #7
EunOi. lol. i so love it! I nearly choked on my noodles when Eunhyuk called me love! wahaha. but i thought you were going to end up with minho >.< should have seen it coming.<br />
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btw, sorry i haven't been able to keep in touch with you lately, i just come and go here. barely have time for the computer anymore..
everlasting_flame #8
@nicolequiambao; thanks ^^<br />
@Myung-daelee62497; lolol another heelea shipper.....sequel? you serious?<br />
@sallpq; WHAT?!?! you want a sequel as well....I don't know...i'll see
gracesally #9
everybody all happy now:)<br />
agreee "SEQUELL" hahahaha<br />
like ur "After story"chingu ^^
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