Chapter 24: Allies

When Life Began
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A nagging noise grows louder and louder until Haneul’s eyes opened to an unfamiliar setting. Turning over, she feels soft comforters under her fingertips with the same soft shuffling still in the background that woke her up in the first place. Sitting up, she sees the back view of Mino as he is in the midst of his unknown task while also ignoring the sudden throb that travels across her forehead. 

Observing him, she realizes he was putting her clothes away in the drawers.

“You’re finally awake?”

Disregarding his question, she jumps out of bed and takes her folded shirt out of his hand. “I can do this myself.” She says gently as she turns back to her luggage on the floor, slightly taken aback by the sight of the neat shirt and the mess she saw. 

He was folding her clothes for her. 

Mino watches her before eyeing bag. “Your messiness was an eyesore.” He comments with the view of her crumpled clothing still sitting in that bag. “Worried I’ll see the undergarments? Something I think you didn’t grab enough of.”

“You were rushing me.” She says in excuse as she shifts her body to block his view.

“You didn’t even try.”

Turning around, she looked at him and spoke her words without any particular annoyance or anger. “Why are you picking on something like this?”

Well, she had a point. He ends up dropping the subject. “Does your body hurt anywhere?”

Upon registering his question – now that he mentioned it. “My neck feels a bit sore.”

“Go to Seunghoon.”

“I think I’ll be fine with not having it checked.” Turning away from him. Haneul takes in the sight of the bedroom and walks towards the window. Pulling aside the curtain, she was met with the starry night sky. It was too dark to really see anything. “We’re in Busan?” The travel took the whole day.

“Mhm.”

Hearing the sound of cluttering, Haneul turned back towards Mino. In his hands, he held up the chess box.

“I said ‘necessities’, didn’t I?” He questioned.

“It’s a matter of opinion.” She responds.

“Who is going to have time to play with you.”

Why did Mino have so much to say? Walking over, Haneul takes the box from his hands. “I can play by myself.” Haneul mutters as she stuffs the box into the luggage along with the clothes already in it. 

“See, I don’t understand why you did that.” Mino comments. “The mess just gets bigger.”

“You nag more than my parents.”

The accusation leaves Mino blank. He watches her turn back around to take over his task from before. Stepping back, he leaned against the drawers as she folded her clothes neatly, leaving them in piles upon the bed. 

“So, how do you do that?”

“Do what?” Mino asked in response.

“Earlier, when you made me…unconscious.” Is that the right term? “You can do what Jeeun can do too?” Haneul looked over her shoulder to meet his eyes.

He shakes his head. “Not everyone can do what she does. And I – “ He didn’t know how to explain it…he never needed to. “If I meddle with your memories enough, it’ll tire out your mind.”

“Oh.” 

“Oh?” 

“That’s why I don’t feel so good.” She whispered quietly to herself while Min

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Osekop12 #1
Congrats on the feature!!
Liajiya
#2
Chapter 50: Still one of the best Mino’s story!!!!!! God I just love the adoration between Mino and Haneul, and the friendship between all of them. Please let me know if you ever write a bonus chapter, side story or a sequel <3
bookgeek_12 #3
Chapter 50: Wow. This is such an amazing story. It’s rare to be able to find good Winner stories, that’s why I’m very glad to have stumbled upon your story. It’s so good that I finished it in just one sitting. Hope you continue writing more stories..
TiansaXee
#4
Chapter 50: This is my second time reading this story. And I still like it. No doubt. Oh I also read The High School Tyrant agn. Anyway, I hope to see an epilogue doe this story? It's just a light request ^^ no pressures. Just want to tell you, your writing skills are very good and I am looking forward for any of them. You are very talented :)
Kidongvin
#5
Chapter 50: Started last night 12am and finished it just now! Wow! I’m so proud of you! I dont even know you personally but this story is really great! I really like it! There aren’t many lovey dovey scene between them but its still great! And still keep me hook up. I fell in love with their character every chapter. I wish you could do more! I can’t wait.
Luluyoongi #6
Chapter 50: I don't know how many times I had told you this but I realllyyyy love your stories.
I rarely read fantasy or supernatural story but I just love this.
I love how you write and how you decided the ending. I'm satisfied with the ending.
And most importantly, I love Mino's pet name for her and how they interact.
And I'm finished, will move to the next stories.
RaiNa7017 #7
Chapter 50: It wasnt thaaaaaaat romantic but it was a really good story.
RinaBelle #8
Chapter 45: I swear, never once in my life that the word “Darling” sounds so pleased in my ear like the way Mino always called Haneul in this story. That’s so lovely and heartfelt.