[R] Trouble Follows
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TROUBLE FOLLOWS
Title [4/5]
I sense originality in this title. Also, I find it sort of different. Although, I didn’t really got the logic of the reason why it is entitled like that. Since at the very beginning, trouble was already taking place. Still, the title’s pretty good.
Foreword [5/5]
I love the foreword! It made me think of what’s the possible things that could happened.
Grammar & Spelling [20/20]
I didn’t see any grammatical errors at all. Reading your story was easy, I understood everything.
Plot [19/20]
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