[1st R] Wolves or Wizards?
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Reviewer: Infinite-Infinity20
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Title {4/5}
The title is pretty good, already. And I think it's too common, you should change it (if you want, it's not my decision) maybe, something a little more unique?
Foreword {4/5}
The foreword it just makes me want to find out what happens, so the foreword is good and interesting. But you don't have a connection with the characters in the foreword until you say 'What to expect:'.
Grammer/Spelling: {18/20}
Your spelling is ok, but you didn't spell Kyung Soo right in one chapter. And I don't think you should put Taoie because it sounds kind of weird unless the name ends with a consonant like Sehunie/Sehunnie.
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