Chapter 12: your work is really good! :) I'm not a shinee stan but your writing makes me feel as if I know them! :) (and if you still need an editor that is fluent in English, I'd be happy to help!) once again great job!
Chapter 9: Hm...hhmm...I'd be really cutious to know what would happen if they couldn't pay enough and Tae and Bum would be bought by that other person. It'd actually be great because then the boys would have to fight for them even more. :D Thanks for the update. I like this story :3
Chapter 7: Well you know how to kill us huh??! Guys, find these fcking bast*rds anf beat them up already... Somehow, I'va a bad feeling about the kidnappers, like we're supposed to know them.... Please update soon :)
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