A day together

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Doojoon POV | Day 20

 

I'm really glad that I had enough money left so that we could went to the funfair...

Some children are running towards me. They are showing me some magic tricks. I'm showing them one of my tricks and they seem to be very happy about it. I'm laughing while looking at Dongwoon. But suddenly my laugh crashed down. He isn't smiling. He just stares at the ground.

 

Hey, is everything fine? What about one drive in the big wheel?

No, I should leave now.... He is still looking down. Is he crying?

Why? I thought you would love to be here?

That's not the case...it's just...

It's just...what?

I don't want to talk about it...

What's the matter? Please tell me what I can do....I want that he is happy like yesterday...

Come on! Just one ride...please... 

Okay fine... 

I'm glad, that he finally said yes.

 

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I'm looking towards Dongwoon. He is just sitting there quietly, while looking outside. It

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alicianime #1
Chapter 26: woow, really good ♥
I don't know if put here all my thoughts bc a lot of spoilerrrrs to the ones who like read the comments before read the story (cause I'm like this)
Btw, here we go
It was so interesting that if I could eat your fic, I would eat it. (???)
I through that when Dongwoon decided to confess to Doojoon, Doojoon would be a little away from DW, but bang! DJ and Suzy. I was like "omg what's gonna happen now??? What about Dongwoon??? how is this get solved??"
I truly bet DJ would get a affair within DW, but, no, you make it more perfect than I through it would be. And when doojoon said about his illness I was "omg he's going to tell dongwoon that he moved to seoul because his parents discovered he's gay" but you surprised me again
I just got to put this fic in my top fics list bc you surprised me a lot.
(I bet my comments is a text righ now, but you gotta know that I loved so much)))
Btw, I think I saw a little thing in one of the chapters (I can't remember which one now) you said something about cancer be caused by a virus... and well... I guess cancer it's caused by our own cells, not virus.
lol byee~~
b2utyjane #2
Chapter 26: Thank you for the bonus chapter...hope to see you in another fanfic... hwaiting^^
b2utyjane #3
Chapter 23: Aww...its really sweet....i was smiling while reading it...hehehehe...thank for the update n hope to see you soon(new chapter)...heheheh
b2utyjane #4
Chapter 22: Aww...i feel sad when doojoon n dongwoon are like that...i can see doojoon smiling to show that he is okay when actually his not...aww it breaks my heart...hope that u'll update soon....
b2stboii #5
Chapter 21: I can't! My eyes is really teary right now. Huhuhu! Please update I wanna know the next. Btw I love your story! :D
b2utyjane #6
Chapter 19: Wah...what happen??i think the marrige is just fake, right??hehehe...i dont know it just my guess...anyway it was nice update...thank ylu and update sooon..
b2utyjane #7
Chapter 12: Yeay..updates, thank u...doodong is just so sweet yet cute...hehehe..authornim hwaiting..
b2utyjane #8
Chapter 10: Yeay,an updates...thank you authornim..keep on updated..btw it was a good one..
b2utyjane #9
Chapter 7: Nice...thank u for the update...love the sketch... ^_^
b2utyjane #10
Chapter 6: Its nice...please update soon...btw im ur new reader...hehehhe
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