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OC (Lee Jee Young): She, so far in the first fifteen chapters, is definitely... unusual. In the second chapter, she claimed that she was not "a damsel in distress", and a "twenty first century woman". In the first few chapters, I was doubting this. I mean... who has with guy she only knew for less than a day? Even if he was handsome, and she said she was "in love", it doesn't come across as sensible. I know this is a fic, but hey, you did choose the shop that hates this stuff! Later, she redeems herself slightly, she despises this organization, and does have a conscience. Overall, a pretty average character. Sure, she's a bit girly, but you can't expect all OCs to be perfect and not girly.

Score: 22/30

Percentage: 73 %

~GraceLily