OCBash Format/Rubric

OC Bashing Shop {HIATUS}

Hello, my darlings. 'Tis me, RiverFawn, and I'm here today to show you the format of our reviews.

Your review will depend on what you chose in your request form, or which ones you picked out of OC, Plot and Cliches, K-Pop Characters, and/or Grammar.

OC- /30. Here we, of course, bash on or praise your OC's character.

Plot and Cliches- /30. Here, we point out any cliches or predicatable plot twists,  or the flow of the story.

K-Pop Characters- /10. Did you write your K-Pop Idols in character? If not, we'll tell you here.

Grammar- /30. Pretty self-explanatory.

Your score will then be converted into a percent. If you get over 85%, you, your amazing story and your wonderful OC get featured in our 'Over 85' section. And if you're lucky, you could get featured at the front of our shop! 


Here's an example of someone who chose to get evaluated on their OC and K-Pop Character (disclaimer- not an actual review/story).

OC- 8/30. Hana is an extremely common OC name. There are too many other Hanas, which makes your OC indistinguishable from others. Please choose a more unique name. Also, her character seems a bit weak- yes, she's pretty, and yes, she likes the piano but there's no emotion; no uniqueness or vivaciousness. She's passive and pretty, and that's all she is.

K-Pop Character- 9/30. Kyungsoo is 4D and motherly and so many other things, but in your story he's just another pretty face; a generic male. As with Hana, add some flavour. People are like snowflakes- unique to a point.

Overall- 17/60, or around 28%. 

 

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SmilingDaze #2
Hey it's Pocpocpockii, I moved accounts and stories to this account. Would you mind re-adding me to the shop or should I fill out a form again?
AnnieWilson
#3
Chapter 17: Thank you for the review!
Just to let you know, I was right with my use of the word . To be means to be very fussy and excessively orderly e.g. "I'm very when it comes to the way my silverware is arranged." = /-retentive. Just shedding some light so you understand what I was saying :)

Of course, the fic is still in the beginning. I'll make sure to work on the characters more to give them some flair :) thanks again!
0291998
#4
Hey! Wanna be affies? ◕‿◕

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/855815/

- Real Fantasy Shop
paula1988
#5
Chapter 16: Thanks for the review :)
azure_bliss
#6
Chapter 13: Thank you for the review!
I've credited the shop in the foreword. :)
ineogongju-nim
#7
Chapter 14: Thank you!
paula1988
#8
requested :)
LimaLemon
#9
Chapter 11: 56.5/70 is a 80.71% not 39.55%
AnnieWilson
#10
I've requested for a review ^-^