New start *rewritten 3/5/14*

Unsure feeling

           It didn't take long for Madi to get around the school and find her way to her classes each day. She had a map in her head of the routes she would take to each class by the 3rd day. In a new school and a new country Madi clearly knew no one. Not a single soul. Except for her beautiful kpop idols of course.  By fifth period she was bored out of her mind and asked to go to the restroom which she ended up wandering the halls. On her way to go check her make up in the crappy water stained mirrors Madi heard a strange scream. Being the adventurous person she is she went to check it out. After speeding walking through the halls towards the strange noises and screams 

           "LET ME GO!" She saw four silhouttes of tall boys who looked very intimidating even from a far. They looked familiar but then again everyone looks familiar in their uniforms (something she wasn't really used to seeing). It was clear they were bullying a boy who was weaker than them. At least that's what it looked like. That's what it always looked like to her.  Madi has been in a fair amount of arguments and fights back in America but being in a new country she didn't want to get involved as the culture of things is different. Yes, she's seen those dramas she knows how it goes.  Turning on her heels Madi started to walk away as one of the boys called out to her. "HEY!" "Yes?" "Don't think of going off and telling anyone what you saw or heard." "It's not like I planned on it." "Good."  She heard plenty of rumours about this boy. The "bad" boy, the "hot" boy, the "wild and y" boy.  

 

   Jackson.

 

 

 

(I don't know if I'll continue this or no t unless some people seem to like it.  My  writing I'm not good at formats and all that stuff so I apologise!  Comments for what I should do or any suggestions  please!)

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ProudToBeBana0423 #1
Chapter 20: This story is great!!
exotic-army #2
Chapter 20: Ok... sooo, i think it should be Jackson/Madi couple. It just... seems right..
Hmmmmm... suggestions on how it should go... maybe, since in the last scene they're face to face, and they practically made love confessions, they go inside and...
I'm sorry, but I'm not too good on giving suggestions. But, i feel like i tried my best... i apologize...^~^ but, after this comment hopefully someone can come and help out.

Also, i hope you update. You're a good writer. Maybe you should ask for suggestions on your other social.. things. I hope i was of at least some help...
I bet i wasn't...-_-
ilovekauai8 #3
Chapter 20: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh. I loooove Jackson/madi couple! He's just way to y to reject!
chocolategirl
#4
Chapter 18: RAIN STORM!!
Hala-bear
#5
Chapter 17: Sangil chukkahi , great to have you back
mydnitesorm
#6
Happy birthday :3
Waffle_Berry #7
Chapter 17: Gurl, i know its hard and i am so sorry upon hearing that, even though i just red your story, i feel as if you are a great writer and i honestly am really liking this story and you have great potential to be a writer, i hope you'll feel lot better by seeing how many people is cheering you on, great job ^^
khayjun-ho #8
Chapter 17: happy birthday!!!! have a good one=)
mk8346 #9
Chapter 16: I'm so sorry..i know its hard but stay strong!
chocolategirl
#10
Chapter 17: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! May all your wishes come true!