(EUNHAE) The Unvisited Paradise Chapter One

Our Every Fantasy: Sapphire Blue Love (Short Fictions Compilation)

Hey~ EunHae fic is starting~ ^^ I changed the plot AND the title.. Please read the foreword for more details. Thanks! ^_^

Requested Song: Beautiful by Hae (I wanted to give you the link but it won't work. -_- Sorry..)


"One, two, three," *SNAP* I smiled as I took a photograph.

Hey, I'm Lee Donghae, a childish and lovable person as they say. I'm a very dedicated person especially when it comes to photography; I can't live without it or my camera. I'm a very stubborn person too--be scared when you ask me a favor because I won't do it if I don't want to, even if you kill yourself in-front of me.

I live alone here in Seoul, South Korea finding the best person to take a picture of. It may be a girl or a guy; but he/she needs to look magnificent in my eyes. You won't be able to please me easily. Kekekeke~

It looks like I'm advertising, right? Don't keep your hopes up. I'll find him/her on MY OWN.

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Here I am at the park taking pictures again. It's my life, I enjoy doing it. Taking pictures of anything I see is a hobby of mine. Even if the battery of my camera dies.........I'll just use my other one! Yeah, I'm rich~

I'm in a very good mood today, so I smile at every person I meet and greet them. "Good morning~" I smiled to a kid running to me. "Good morning, hyung~" he innocently said. So cute~ I caressed his hair and asked, "May I ask your name?"

"It's Lee EunHae~" he said. "Anchy is my nickname~" Aww~ How cute can this little boy be? "How about hyung?" he asked, sparkling. I chuckled, "It's Lee Donghae."  He smiled. "Oh hyung! I need to go umma is calling me already." he pointed at his mother who was calling for him. "Okay~" I said. "Byebye hyung~" he waved as he ran to his mother. I did too. "You might trip! Be careful!"

"I will, hyung~~~"

'Such a cute boy~' I thought. I chuckled at the thought. I want to have a son like him already~ I pouted.

I stood up to go to another place. I've been here for hours now, I'm too tired of it. But, now that I've said it, Were should I go?... Hmm.. whatever! I'll just go to a random place~

I walked not knowing what direction I was going to. I just walked, walked and walked until I arrived at a certain place. And WOW! Seriously, wow.This place...it's the best place I've ever been to! SERIOUSLY!

I entered it. "Walking randomly is just the best.." I said, still amazed by the environment I'm walking into. I looked at everything, every tree, the ground, every flower, everything! "It's like.." I paused. "....an unvisited garden!"

I took pictures of those scenes, not wasting my time. I also took a photo of every little detail, not missing one. As I was taking pictures, I walked backwards. Not knowing that there was a big branch behind my feet, I tripped. "AHHH!"

(EUNHYUK'S POV)

I'm here again, at my favorite place, 'The Unvisited Garden' as I call it. A very magnificent place indeed. Full of trees, flowers, everything! It's like a paradise...

I was sketching peacefully under the shade of a tree when I suddenly heard a loud 'THUMP!' on my back. "AHHH!" I heard someone scream. I looked at my back and saw a guy, flat on the ground. I stood up and immediately ran to him, leaving my sketchbook and other things behind.

"Are you okay?" I helped him stand up. "I'm ok-OW!" he exclaimed. "W-what happened?" I asked. "I think I sprained my ankle." he said while holding his sprained foot. "It hurts..."

"Do you want me to carry you and take you to my home for treatment?"

"I-i'm sorry, what?" he stuttered. I chuckled. Maybe he misheard and hear this sentence instead, 'Do you want me to take you to my home?'

"Do you want treatment?" I repeated.

"U-uhh.. Sure. Thanks~" he smiled. Such an angelic smile; a smile that could melt your heart. I'm not a cold hearted person though, but I could literally melt now. "I'll carry you." I suggested. "O-okay." he stuttered. I chuckled again. How cute~

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We arrived home and I let him sit him on my bed. "Ouch.." he complained as he held his ankle. "Wait, I'll get the first-aid kit." I said. "Thanks!" he smiled again. I did too.

"Here; I'll do that for you." I said as I treated his injured foot.

After hours of screaming, whining, complaining and treating, I let him sleep so that he'll be able to rest.

I was about to leave the room when I accidentally looked into his handsome yet innocent face. 'Have this guy never even fought before?' I thought. 'He looks so innocent, makes me want..to take care of him..'

Aish! What am I saying?

"Appa..." Hae talked in his sleep. Appa? Does he miss his father? I should let him go home already. I looked outside my window. "It's night time too."

I nudged him a bit. "Hey.. Wake up~" Come to think of it, I don't know his name yet. "Wake up, fishy!" I gave him 'fishy' as a nickname since he looks like a fish.

"Uh? Oh! What?" he quickly sat up. He looked at me. "Oh.. h-hey.." he gave a so so smile. He's embarassed~

"It's okay; don't be mebarassed." I smiled. "I'm not!" he defended himself in a childish way. "You're so cute~" I said. "C-c-c-cute?" he stuttered; I laughed. "Why are you stuttering so hard? Don't you think you're cute?"

"Yes, I know that I am but--"

"HAHAHAHAH! Not conceited, are you?" I sarcastically said while laughing my heart out. "My name is Lee Hyukjae." I introduced myself, still quite laughing. "You?"

"Lee Donghae," he answered. "Isn't Hyukjae the name of a comedian?" he asked. "I don't.. actually...know?" I pouted. "I don't know anything about the modern world." I shyly said. "I could see..that.." Fishy Hae said while looking around my house.

Well, my house is a normal one. Not big, not small, NORMAL. I think that Hae just came from a rich family. I sighed.

"I don't want to call you Hyukjae so I'll call you..hmm.." he thought. "Why do you need to give me a nickname if we wouldn't be meeting each other again after you leave?"

"I'll be staying here." he smiled his cutest smile.

"U-uhh.. Pardon me but, WHAT?!"


Sososososososo?????? WHATCHA THINK ABOUT IT?! x) LOL Ok.. I'm saying this now.. THOSE PEOPLE WHO COMMENTS, I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH! TO THOSE WHO DOESN'T...PLEASE COMMENT!! I'm begging you! Is it fast? Am I rushing? Confusing? Good? WHAT? Please tell me so that I'll know what to do~ Thanks so much!! ^^

 

 

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Mimi012
#1
Chapter 19: I love this fic for real especially kyumin and eunhae
ohmykrease
#2
Yah!
Update!
TheCuteTofu
#3
I'm currently reading the Yewook fic and it's so sad! My Yesungie lost his voice! *weeps*
25oppas #4
And FYI your last update isn't a fail.And it'll never be a fail. ^^ I know you, you're very good at many things. Well I think not only at many things I think you're good at everything. :DDD
25oppas #5
Yah~! Just keep on updating and I'll keep on reading it!Arasso? Mianhae if I was not able to read it earlier :) I told you... I don't like crying. :D But since you're the one who made it I'll surely read it(well I'm already reading it). And I'll keep on reading it ^^ Fortunately,I'm not yet crying. :DD Kamsahamnida for making this fic~!Saranghaeyo~! <3 :DD
chewwy #6
OMG THIS NEW CHAPTER, AMAZING.<br />
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I wonder if you cried during writing it, because i cried while reading, a LOT. It's definately not a fail!update, my gosh. Don't underestimate yourself!<br />
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I just don't get it how can someone create a text like this, it's so full of emotions and adsfasgafd my english now, I can't say what I'd want about this so I'll just tell you (once again) that you are a wonderful writer! I've never read something this beautiful __ever__, and it's so realistic too!! I hope you'll continue this soon, definitely waiting for it!<br />
100% love you ♥<br />
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And when you update, I'll try to read it ASAP~
chewwy #7
yaaah, you mentioned me in your A/N haha. No i absolutely do NOT hate this, i just haven't had time to read it T_T your writing is still so so so awesome i can't even...! i just hope something postitive happens to yesung. (still haven't read the 2nd chpt. before making this comment) i'll make another comment after i've read the 2nd chapter~
leonlovekyumin
#8
(HANCHUL) Like We Used To<br />
there is nothing i can say<br />
nice and sad but i feel kinda bored<br />
because i'm not used to read sad/angst story of Hanchul and it's rambling/bertele-tele (i cannot describe well with english language)<br />
I am sorry.<br />
Please dont angry with me, im trying to honest :)<br />
but i still love you. (^3^)
leonlovekyumin
#9
(EUNHAE) The Unvisited Paradise = YAY!!! I ship EunHae second!!! hehe<br />
Its chessy, when I read EunHae, i wonder who is TOP, Who is Husband and wife XDD<br />
ckckckckck it's good *thumbs for you* ^^