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Romance at Rose Cross Academy[ON HIATUS]

"You want anything to eat?" Ying Ying asked as she slipped off her shoes and closed the door behind Luhan.

"No thanks." He replied slipping off his shoes. They decided to do the project in Ying Ying's room so that they wouldn't be disturbed by one of the boys who occassionally came to play games.

"Ok. Just get everything ready I'll be back in a second." Ying Ying said as she walked into the kitchen. Luhan was setting up everything when he got a text from Kris asking of his whereabouts. Luhan replied with a text saying that he was doing the project at Ying Ying's apartment. Shortly after his phone vibrated again.

Ok have fun...But not too much fun!! kekekeke

See you later

Kris

Luhan smirked then carried on setting everything up.*hmm I wonder what's taking Ying Ying so long.* he thought to himself as he leaned back. Ying Ying then walked in carrying a tray loaded with snacks, chocolates and drinks.

"So let's start" she said as she put the tray on the table then sat on the black leather sofa next to Luhan. 

"Wow that's a lot of food" Luhan said with wide eyes as he stared at the tray.

"Help yourself" she said as she tapped away on the laptop. After doing some research and chatting about exo and the boys. You decided to sit on the floor so you had more room to spread out the papers. You reached for a gummy sweet and Luhan reached for one too. Your hands touched and you both looked at each other in the eye. You stared at each other until you heard the door unlock. You moved your hand away and stood up trying to conceal your blushing cheeks.

"Erm I think one of the guys came over I'll be right back." You said as you ran out. 

Hey there suuuuuuuuuuuper short chapter here!! Might do a double update but don't get your hopes up!! teehee!! Anyway Enjoy, Comment and Subscribe!! 

Byeeeee!!!! >.< btw who else has wattpad?? Annyeong!!!!!

 

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NessaLuvsKpop
Suffering from massive writers block!!! I've lost it since my exams!! curse you exams!!! anyway please make any suggestions theyre always welcome and thankyou

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princess-sohee
#1
Chapter 10: are you still gonna continue this? ;A;
DefyingDecency #2
Chapter 10: Hey there. While your story is in itself interesting and I will continue to read, I have some advice for you. Your main character is too much of a Mary Sue (a character that is perfect inside and out), and that makes the story kind of flat. A character needs to have at least one major flaw, if not more, to have any character development (unless Ying Ying turns evil in the end, which would surprise me). Try to give her some kind of aspect that isn't totally perfect - it'll make the character much more round and make for a more interesting story with plenty of plot material. Also, if every boy is already in love with her on sight, it kind of takes away the fun of watching two characters fall in love with each other.
On the other hand, your spelling is good, with just a few grammar mistakes, but when it comes to grammar I'm generally too strict so don't mind me. Your banner is amazing. If you work on your characters, this story will be seriously awesome.
Wow, I seriously babbled away just now. You're always asking for reviews, so I figured I might as well give you my opinion... There I go again. Sorry.
Anyways, I'll shut up now, and I'll be waiting for new updates. Thanks! - DefyingDecency
xxxarronyanxxx
#3
Chapter 8: awww Jerry :'(
Bubblethehun
#4
Chapter 4: The story is interestingggg ! Update soon !