Introducing Liu Pui Ying!!(OC/You)

Romance at Rose Cross Academy[ON HIATUS]

Introduction

You live in Rose Cross Academy a school for the rich and intelligent. You attend normal classes in the morning: Maths; Science; English; French; Geography; Korean; Cantonese; Mandarin; History, the classes alternate everyday, then after lunch your taught how to survive in the business world as heirs to successful companies and businesses. However some people like yourself being top of the class do not need to attend the sessions after lunch and so that is your free time or space for other classes like: cooking; electronics; textiles; product design; etc. During the weekends you stay on campus but occassionlly go to the shopping centre to hang out with friends. Clothes and essentials are sent to you by your parents as you live in the boarding school like many other students. You decided to move in because you were tired of moving about with your parents to the numorious amount of companies all over the world as your family specialised in all fields of work. 

One thing that makes your boarding unique is the fact that they recently became co-ed and your one of a few girls who applied. Although you are one of a few girls, your the only girl that stays at the boarding school, not much guys stay at the boarding school either so you have your own floor in the campus boarding block, and you don't talk to girls. You are a tomboy, you grew up with two older brothers and no sisters, your brothers are also managing their own businesses and have gotten married and even has a few kids, and so you feel more comfortable with boys. You like playing basketball and dodgeball, and you love to play games like: Black Ops and Saints Row lll, you don't like make-up and dresses and you'd rather play games then go shopping unless it's food related shopping. Your skinny and short (5ft1/155cm) and you have brown eyes and long black hair like a normal 16 year old chinese girl. Your pretty, but you don't admit it and loads of guys have tried courting you, and your smart as your at the top of all classes. 

Your popular but you only have a few close friends, all of which are guys, and your not spoilt like the other girls that go to your school. You love to eat, although you never gain weight, and your not bothered about the way you look or dress.

Hey guys so first chapter to my new fanfic. Just an introduction to the main character so it's a very short chapter. I'll probably do a double update today!!! (YAY TO UPDATES!!) Anyway enjoy, Comment and subscribe. Also please read my other fanfic with Dae Hyun from B.A.P

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/417061/when-being-just-friends-isn-t-enough-romance-rivalry-daehyun

Love you guys. Peace out!! ^^

 

 

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NessaLuvsKpop
Suffering from massive writers block!!! I've lost it since my exams!! curse you exams!!! anyway please make any suggestions theyre always welcome and thankyou

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princess-sohee
#1
Chapter 10: are you still gonna continue this? ;A;
DefyingDecency #2
Chapter 10: Hey there. While your story is in itself interesting and I will continue to read, I have some advice for you. Your main character is too much of a Mary Sue (a character that is perfect inside and out), and that makes the story kind of flat. A character needs to have at least one major flaw, if not more, to have any character development (unless Ying Ying turns evil in the end, which would surprise me). Try to give her some kind of aspect that isn't totally perfect - it'll make the character much more round and make for a more interesting story with plenty of plot material. Also, if every boy is already in love with her on sight, it kind of takes away the fun of watching two characters fall in love with each other.
On the other hand, your spelling is good, with just a few grammar mistakes, but when it comes to grammar I'm generally too strict so don't mind me. Your banner is amazing. If you work on your characters, this story will be seriously awesome.
Wow, I seriously babbled away just now. You're always asking for reviews, so I figured I might as well give you my opinion... There I go again. Sorry.
Anyways, I'll shut up now, and I'll be waiting for new updates. Thanks! - DefyingDecency
xxxarronyanxxx
#3
Chapter 8: awww Jerry :'(
Bubblethehun
#4
Chapter 4: The story is interestingggg ! Update soon !