Denial

Romance at Rose Cross Academy[ON HIATUS]

After a few minutes Ying Ying's eyes widened as she realised what she was doing and she pulled away with her hand clasped on .

" What's wrong?" Luhan asked concern on his face.

"I can't do this. Its not me." Ying Ying replied as she began to back away.

"Why not? I like you, dont you like me?" Luhan said as he tried closing the gap.

"Yes, no, I dont know. I need time to think." Ying Ying said as she ran out the door past the rest of EXO.

Luhan's face fell as he sank into his chair and the EXO joined him.

"It's ok, just give her time to think yeah? I'm sure she's just overwhelmed by your confession." Kay said giving him a pat on the back.
-----------------------------------------------------------------
Mei Li to the bathroom and splashed water on her face. 
"What am I doing I can't do this, even if I did like him nothing can happen, he's a celebrity I'm just a person our world's don't mix." She said as she splashed more water on her face.
Suddenly someone nudged her. She spun around and saw Hua Hua (means flower in chinese) the leader of the EXO fanclub. "I see you getting close and personal with my prince Lu Han. You better back off or I will make you back off." She said leaving the bathroom flicking her hair.

Oooooo new rival!! Dun dun duuuuuun!!! What will happen next? *gasp* honestly I have no idea haha. ottokae!! Anyway I hope you like it after almost a year of nothing! And who else is sad about Luhan's leave I'm going to miss him in EXO.
Well enjoy, comment and subscribe!!
Byeeeee

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
NessaLuvsKpop
Suffering from massive writers block!!! I've lost it since my exams!! curse you exams!!! anyway please make any suggestions theyre always welcome and thankyou

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
princess-sohee
#1
Chapter 10: are you still gonna continue this? ;A;
DefyingDecency #2
Chapter 10: Hey there. While your story is in itself interesting and I will continue to read, I have some advice for you. Your main character is too much of a Mary Sue (a character that is perfect inside and out), and that makes the story kind of flat. A character needs to have at least one major flaw, if not more, to have any character development (unless Ying Ying turns evil in the end, which would surprise me). Try to give her some kind of aspect that isn't totally perfect - it'll make the character much more round and make for a more interesting story with plenty of plot material. Also, if every boy is already in love with her on sight, it kind of takes away the fun of watching two characters fall in love with each other.
On the other hand, your spelling is good, with just a few grammar mistakes, but when it comes to grammar I'm generally too strict so don't mind me. Your banner is amazing. If you work on your characters, this story will be seriously awesome.
Wow, I seriously babbled away just now. You're always asking for reviews, so I figured I might as well give you my opinion... There I go again. Sorry.
Anyways, I'll shut up now, and I'll be waiting for new updates. Thanks! - DefyingDecency
xxxarronyanxxx
#3
Chapter 8: awww Jerry :'(
Bubblethehun
#4
Chapter 4: The story is interestingggg ! Update soon !