One Heart, Two choices

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This will be my third fanfic, I will work on this and **Who am I in your eyes?** at the same time.

This fanfic will be about Eunhae, and Hanhae.

And I’m not a pro at writing rated, but I will try my best xD

Please comment and tell me what you think  :)

Foreword

Ages

 Heechul - 21

Hankyung – 20

Yesung – 18

Eunhyuk – 17

Donghae – 17

Siwon – 17

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Evelyn-Everdeen
#1
Chapter 41: *lets out air* ooookay. I just finished reading.
In this last chapter I think that some things were taken a little bit too easy. Like, in the beginning where Siwon's mother just said that it was okay for her that her husband has a son with another woman and so on.
But if I leave this aside - thank you soooooooo much for sharing this story with us!!!! It's really awesome!!! But I wonder who Henry's murderer is... I like Henry... *pouts* But if you're like me there, then you don't even know yourself who the murderer is because it wasn't important for the rest of the story. But I'm glad that Hangeng and Heechul found out who killed poor Henry!!!
yay for Eunhae living close to one another and for Hyuk's father accepting Hae!!! :D And yay for Hae telling the police what his 'father' has done to him!!!

Maybe I'll see you again/you'll see me again in one of your other stories, I don't know yet. But I guess the chance isn't too low! :D
See you! *waves* and once more cuz I can't say it often enough - I really loved "One Heart, Two Choices"!!!
Evelyn-Everdeen
#2
Chapter 36: Okay, well... just a little update here - I found your story a while ago and saved it as a bookmark and now started to read it a couple of hours ago. I haven't really stopped once. But I have to get off now so I try to collect everything I found until now at this point and then I will comment again later.
okay... for the beginning - I like Hae acting _______ from time to time but it's also cute how he cares about Hyuk. And how Hyuk is afraid to climb over him at the camp.. *laughs*
But then I think that it's a little weird that Hangeng suddenly turned from good to bad. I have to admit that I needed a couple of chapters to accustome at that.
Then, I like Siwon's character a looooot and Yesung's pretty nice, too! :D
it's really nice from Siwon's family that they just took care of Donghae and didn't even try to get him to move back to his own home (at least it seemed like that). I also like how Siwon always took care of him!!
And Heechul!!!! I love how he protected Hae from their father. I just wonder what happened with their mother and what Heechul just found... but I guess I'll read it soon.
I can't stand their father - but it's quite funny that I have a person just like that in on of my own ffs, too. >.< I really pity Hae a lot for having a father like that!!! That just makes me like Siwon and Heechul more!!!
I like how Hae and Hyuk became a couple though I think that it was a little rushed in the beginning. But I don't care, your story's amazing!!!
Gosh, I start to not understand anymore who is related with whom! Is hae related with half of the characters in this story? And that Hyuk has been together with Hae's cousin... if that comes out that might be quite funny...

Whatever, like I said, this was only the first comment, the next will come later when I get on again. But for now - you're story's awesome!!!! (lol, I immediately recommended it to a close friend of mine here on aff! :D )
CozURhere
#3
emm..i think the ending seemed wanna be rush...<br />
the plot of the story is already great and amazing but <br />
the ending make me wanna know more...i expect more i think...<br />
but then, still good!
renprix
#4
i cant believe this... It ended already... I wassnt able to read the last few chapters...
MeCrazy96
#5
Omo,,I really love youre story's !! <3 I like the end. :D
MoDeul143
#6
The fic, in all, was good :) <br />
But the ending seemed so rushed TT TT <br />
but good nonetheless :)
itshyukie
#7
uwaaahh...<br />
such an happy ending then .. kekeke
renprix
#8
@CocoCrazy what do you mean by poor thingy?? Lol... <br />
<br />
-poor hae.. But he shouldnt feel like being unwanted, because if he is unwanted he might have kicked by his real father a long time ago... Right? And siwon's mother even hugged her after knowing it.. She could have slapped her since he's made of out of her knowldege... So he shouldnt be like that... There would just be a reason why his father didnt get him at his old family... he should have just asked for explanation...
itshyukie
#9
aiigoooo~~~ poor hae ~~<br />
don't cry baby~~