C03 - HnieMinn
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This is a pretty banner. I like the various croppings. The main things that stick out to me when I look at it is that
the three models are in the foreground and all the texture stuff is in the background.
It keeps it very clear but also a bit disconnected, try adding more elements to see what happens.
The text for "Captain" looks lovely. I would suggest trying new fonts for the subtexts since
you seem to use it very often. There's nothing wrong with having a favorite but trying new ones
may be fun too. Thank you for the entry<3
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