C03 - hota-rubi
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Critique:
This is a very pretty banner you have here<3 First things first, composition! Yup, it could be stronger.
Try to pick a focal point-one singular focal point. I'll use my banners as example:
Bad:
Which image is the focal? I can't tell. I don't know what I did. It's like I couldn't decide.
Eye contact on the model is important, it's like they are communicating directly with you.
The image on the left draws your eyes to her but then the bigger model with text also
demands attention. What is my eye suppose to do? It ends up bouncing back and forth.
In your banner, if I had to pick a focal point, I would pick the text, which is fine when done correctly,
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