honorius
Graphic Review Archive
First Impressions: [9/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
it looks like nice but it looks like a practice
in blending and not really a completed piece.
i like the textures used.
its a nice piece but its not something
i'm going to think about years later
(yeah im weird i have favorite pieces
that i still think about years after i first saw them)
Technique: [19/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
blending is done very well. the bottom male (? so much androgyny these days)
is blended in very well especially at the top part of his head.
where the bottom guy's arm cuts off the white spot there is quite apparent..
maybe thats from the texture used but it stands out a bit much,
which would have been fine if you were trying to put the text there.
and the shape of it is .. too...like this:
also the red haired guy's cable sweater is quite noticeable and looks connected to the left guy.
i would maybe either move him over to the right a tad more or blur it out a bit.
Resources: [16/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
images used are good. textures are very good.
i like the subtle old english type of text on the right. its a nice touch.
the dots probably from the poster remind me of stars and galaxies though,
which doesnt really fit the dark theme but its subtle and only in a couple spots so i can let it go.
i would have liked to see a stock or two to enhance the meaning/connection of the poster.
if you ignore the words, when someone views this poster, its just three guys.
theres no story behind this. yes its true there isnt a "story" for it but all good art
should be trying to say something. using stocks are like using props to help tell the story.
Composition: [19/20]
did you create an eye catching and balanced piece
how well does your piece "flow"
the composition is good. the images connect well.
i like how they were chosen and placed.
i like how the left guy is facing left.
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