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First Impressions: [6.5/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look )
"mmmmmm its nice. they look a bit conjoined.
my eyes are screaming for contrast. ill explain
more down in another section. but here is what just
a difference in contrast can do:"

Technique: [10/20]

how masterful are you at blending/cutting
The outside edges of both characters are well incorporated into the piece,
but where they both come together, there are major problems. 
I can see a very harsh point at the tip of the girl's head. did you lasso it?
 It seems like the guy's dark clothing was dragged out and onto her.
Also the picture placement are good in general areas,
but i'll talk about that more in composition. I would have moved the girl up a bit
because im not sure what happened to the guy's neck but it kind of 
follows the same path as her hair line giving the conjoined look. 
i would have definitely liked to see her body's border in front of his.
 

Resources: [12.5/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
i like the dirty paper texture it works for such a poster. 
but make sure to be careful with their faces. 
if you look carefully at them, and the guy's is more obvious he looks sorta sick/ill.
scanlines i dont think are necessary. im going to guess
that they were put on top of the final and then the blending mode
was on normal and lower opacity. this contributed to the contrast issue. 
it makes your image sort of "fade away"
It's a nice simple piece, and i would have liked to see maybe a stock or two
just to enhance it and give more desc

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope