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Graphic Review Archive
First Impressions: [7/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
ok its a horror poster. so first thing let's talk about.
does this scare the pants off of me.
nope. sorry. next thing that stuck out when i first saw it.
the the proportions. the canvas looks awkward.
i think it should be taller.
also the size of the girl is super small but the text is really really huge.
its a composition issue and ill explain more below.
other than that its alright. not a bad first impression.
Technique: [20/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
blending seems good.
there are no harsh edges around the picture that i can tell.
not sure because if it was like that or not, but from
what i can see its good. so sorry cant comment much on it.
Resources: [12/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
this is a section that i think you could have done a lot with to enhance the poster.
right now its just "ehh". but if you add some more stuff to it,
you can turn it into something that makes people go WOW.
you can add a bunch of things to make it scary/eerie.
blood. paper rips. the moon. guns. knife. the list goes on.
you can add some textures to the piece and give it more dimension.
when i say texture in the sentence above i mean LITERAL texture
like if i look at it, i can imagine running my hand over it and FEELING something.
maybe its the grainy sands or sharp glass pieces. something extra would be good.
the image here is ok. i would have liked to see you take it to the next level with the enhancements i mentioned above.
i like the subtle scratchy texture over the whole piece, I would have liked to see more of it though.
also the white spirals on the top right looks random to me and i rather they not be there.
Composition: [14/20]
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