Girl from hell

You Got Me

 

Koharu’s POV

 

Yabu-kun and Keito-kun are assisting me.

 

“Gomenasai.” I uttered.

 

“Shh.” Yabu-kun asked.

 

Where about to go down the stairs when I felt someone push me.

 

Then I went all blank.

 

 

 

 

 

Yabu’s POV

 

I’m assisting Koharu-chan and with a split second she lies at bottom of the stairs.

 

“Koharu-chan!!!” I shouted.

 

I carried her and went immediately to the clinic.

 

I left Keito-kun there.

 

Nothing’s on my mind but Koharu-chan.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keito’s POV

 

“What the hell do you want?!!” I asked her while holding her shoulders.

 

“I.. I didn’t.. I don’t know,” she said stuttering.

 

I can tell that she really didn’t mean it but still.

 

“I didn’t plan to go as far as that.” She said as she calmed down.

 

I let her go.

 

“If something bad happens to her, I don’t know what I can do to you.”

 

She’s wicked. Even though she didn’t mean it, I know part of her is happy that it happened.

 

I turned.

 

She fell into her knees and I can hear that she’s crying.

 

 “How can you do this Freya-chan?” I asked her then followed Yabu-kun.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Freya’s POV

 

Since I’m here, I’ll just go with the flow.

 

I’m crying right now but I wiped it. I can’t be like this. A devil like me shouldn’t cry.

 

Yes I’m evil. You can do nothing about that.

 

It’s natural. No one can change me.

 

No one even dares to come close to me anymore so there’s really no chance for me to change.

 

Since I’ve gone this far, I’m going to make sure that I’ll get you back Yabu-kun.

 

 

 

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I didn't (almost) cry while writing this.

 

I'm actually talking about the chapters after this LOL..

 

Please give lots of love and comments :D

 

By the way I'm gonna share something..When you login you're there's this thing on the upper left side that tells you if you have a new comment, friend posts and whatsoever right? I don't know what happened but after I updated chapter 40, there's no update about the comments and I was really sad at that time.. As in! and when I checked the comments cyrilcuthbert  Dr4g0n0m Jmskitten04 commented but I wasn't aware!!! But when I read their comments I felt like all the sadness was washed away haahahah XDDDDD

 

Love ya all!!

 

Nathypipz\m/ 

 

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Jmskitten04 #1
Chapter 65: Oh my! The ending was beautiful! Thank you! <3 you are amazing! I really enjoyed the story, lookin forward to the next story! <3
cyrilcuthbert
#2
Chapter 65: jjdhescudjahhdhdd


super nakakaiyak fkdjdahsjdfkwoaiirif



hindi ko.alam sasabihin ko djdfosjhdhff ikaw kasi ehhh.....



ang echos.nung paper scene hahahahahaha pero mas lalo pang ako napaiyak nung nabasa ko yun!!!!


tapos akala ko si kota yung yumakap.sa.kanya nung tatalon.na siya si keito pala.......huhuhuhuhuhu




WOW para ka talagang namamaalam na sa mga pinagsasabi mo XD



WELL, hindi.pwede yun kasi gagawa ka.pa ng panibagong story!!!!!! hahahahahaha hihintayin ko yun ;)



TULUGU????!!!!!!!! Pupunta ka ng Japan ng bonggang-bonga???!!! sama.mo ako.pls. XD




napaisip lang ako ngayon, at siguradong mapapaisip.ka rin XD


HINDI KO NA TALAGA MAALALA KUNG PAANO KO NAKITA ITONG STORY MO....HAHAHAHAHA




SIGURO ITINAKDA.LANG NI GOD.NA MAKITA KO ITONG STORY MO AT MAGING SUBSCRIBER NITO AT MAKILALA KITA (LOL) AND DRAMA KO SHET >.<





sad ending siya.....aaaawwwwwtttttssssuuuu




chuper.sakit.dito. (points in my heart) ahuhuhuhuhuh



medyo natuwa.naman ako kasi may bago siyang kakilala.na.kamukha.ni Kota.na super.bilis.dumamoves.kasi.umakbay.agad agad kay Koharu XD




PERO.NAMATAY PA RIN SI KOTA...HINDI KO TALAGA ITO TANGGAP... MASAKIT.....MASAKIT....




AAAHHHMMM..ano pa ba.......





SUPER AWESOME NG STORY MO!!!!!




GAwa.ka.pa ng maraming stories ha........mga 9999999999999999 ....HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
fai-chan
#3
Chapter 65: GENIUS ENDING!!!

me halfway in the ending: HE DIED?? NOOOO~~

and then on his burial..I TEARED UP ON THE UMBRELLA GUY PART.

You are such an amazing author! You even care for your readers' ideas!

Omedettou on this great fic!!

AND OH WOW I AM ON THE AUTHOR'S NOTE!! *~~~* I FEEL PRIVILEGED. XD
Dr4g0n0m #4
Chapter 65: That was the best ending EVER!!! So creative ... SO CREATIVE!!!!!~
This is officially my fav fanfic in the entire PLANET~
I'm really happy you wrote a unique story. there are lots of "Happily ever after" stories out there, and people read & easily forget them the next day; But your story with it's amazing plot twists, addicting story and creative scenarios (Including the Super-Cute moments) and also great character development and Unique, Original ending will be remembered by the readers for a very, very long time.

Goodjob! please continue writing great stories like this <(^.^<)<( ^.^ )>(>^.^)>

Also, I'm glad i could help you out <3
Dr4g0n0m #5
Chapter 63: *SPOILER ALERT* close ur eyes if u haven't reached Chapter 62 yet :P


PS: Jumping or not Jumping... It can be a happy ending eitherway... U know?
Dr4g0n0m #6
Chapter 63: *SPOILER ALERT* close ur eyes if u haven't reached Chapter 62 yet :P


PS: Jumping or not Jumping... It can be a happy ending eitherway... Is happy considered koharu dieing and joining yabu, while her friends mourn, or koharu living with grief over yabu's death?
Dr4g0n0m #7
Chapter 63: QQ ending :((((
We've come so far ne?
It's your story, happy or sad, make it awesome <(^.^<)
Jmskitten04 #8
Chapter 63: This all is a dream right?! It can't end this wY
cyrilcuthbert
#9
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PLEASE UPDATE. THANK YOU XD







WELL, just end it and write a sequel...... and i think it is better if it is a HAPPY ENDING W/ TWISTSSSSSS.......(so i wont have a heartache ».«)
Yui_Blackstar
#10
Chapter 63: OH MY GOD!!! :(((
Everyone wants a happy ending right (even me)? But not every story has to end happy. With how things are going on now, don't you think it would be hard to turn things around?