Chapter 1: Well this story has a nice writing style and idea behind it but I didn't really like it. Don't get me wrong I didn't have it either but it wasn't one of the stories that I'll remember I read. It was a lil messy and had many unimportant details, while the important ones weren't written. I eventually got bored of it and stopped at chapter 9. Don't get me wrong I'm not trying to hate on you or make you feel bad, I'm just saying ways you can improve for your next stories! I normally wouldn't even bother to write a comment but this story has sooo much potential! I loved the characters and writing style ♡ pls don't take this by heart, I'm just a random person that eats pears >^<
Chapter 12: Hi i'm new reader! Your story is simply fluffy and romantic ^^ I love it. I hope you can update it again...i'm waiting for more kaisoo n hunhan...but since you seem so busy, just take your time..i shall wait ^^ fighting author- nim
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