"Do you want to dance with me?" Jimin

Description

He sneeked behing me, without me noticing and layed his warm hands on both side of my hips.

I gasped and turned around. Looking up with wide opened eyes, I starred into Jimin's moon shaped ones.

"You dont need to stop.." 
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A story about Jimin falling in love with his make-up artist. And everything seems to work just too well until the first cracks begin to show. 

(It sound cliché, but I promise it's actually not that bad. Please give it a try and I'll see you ♡ )

Foreword

Alright, so this is my first attempt to write a fanfiction.....

 

Hope I am doing alright? Hehe ^^

- Tell me in the comments!! 

 

Would love to know your opinion and what I can do better. 

xxx

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InferiorityComplex #1
Chapter 10: Omg I keep re-sending chapter 10! It's perfect
hueydd
#2
Chapter 10: How did you know I wanted to take a bath with you?

waaaahhh...... turn him on...
but why??????????????????
must the end....
could u make a season 2 lol

so love love .....
sorry late commect get busy at work ^^
hueydd
#3
Chapter 10: How did you know I wanted to take a bath with you?

waaaahhh...... turn him on...
but why??????????????????
must the end....
could u make a season 2 lol

so love love .....
sorry late commect get busy at work ^^
hueydd
#4
Chapter 8: wahh... our chim chim can "control it"...
ok so tonight we on fire....
so when is update???

make it fire authornim....
pls dont say.. NOT TODAY
ROFL
hueydd
#5
Chapter 7: WAHHH... WAHHHH....
need clear my mind now...
u've got me with " god"..
ahahahahahahhaha

i think i will put rest on you with next chap... more crige scene and more scene and more make me laughing like crazy..
ROFL
hueydd
#6
Chapter 6: "I wont be able to be a gentlemen anymore"
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa........... i love his naughty side LOL
Jungkookie_is_bae
#7
Chapter 7: Ooooohh I love this please update soon~~~
hueydd
#8
Chapter 5: ahh sorry for late respon... so busy but keep remind me must read this... ahhh... u make me imagining something ??!!!!
waahhhhhh u've got me LOL..
can wait for next scene... i love the way sweet talk with them.. ofc the one not y lol...
ahh ok i mean y.. hahahahhahahah
InferiorityComplex #9
Chapter 5: I love how this is more than just a . Usually when I read there isn't much romance, only ual scenes..But yours is different because you added in sweet fluffy moments which creates a nice balance and things don't escalate too quickly. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter!
hueydd
#10
Chapter 4: Sorry for spamming your comment but i love to reading again and again..
imagining the situation from the start ^^