If The Little Prince is a Love Story

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AUTHOR: shashashy
CHARACTERS: Jeon Jung Min (OC), Do Kyungsoo
GENRES: Classic, Fluff, Romance
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Shop Requested: 4D: The Wonderful Tale

DESCRIPTION:
If the Little Prince is a love story, then the Little Prince would be a girl named Jeon Jung Min... reviewTitle [4/5]

  The title is too long, however it did fit the story. Also, it's my first time seeing this type of title so it's pretty fresh. 
  What I really love is the relevance of the title with the story. It didn't really give out that much while at the same time it did. Does that even make sense? 


Appearance: [3/5]

  The layout made it hard for me to read, and the font size is too big in my opinion. But the poster is fine. I'm no graphic artist but it is indeed a beautiful poster that is pleasing in the eye. The background matches up with the vibes and it's not a gif (thank goodness!) which made it easier to read.


 Description & Foreword: [8/10]

  That one sentence description is awesome! Although it's short, it kinda explained the entire story. I don't know but I really love it.
  You used the foreword to credit people, and that's alright, but i do suggest that you give out a few words or something. Then again, it's your foreword. You're free to use it on whatever your heart's content.


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JESLEN #1
Chapter 6: Oh hi! Im sorry Ive been away too long from this site and I only read this review just now. Thank u very much for your kind words. It wasnt harsh at all. In fact, I didnt expect to receive such score considering that this isny my exact style of writing. Haha. I prefer writing dark stuffs, but somehow I wanted to see how I can do romcom stories. Thank u very much again and I really agree with everything that you've said. The reason why there seems to be missing info about Sehun and Yoona is that their story will revolve in the short sequel which Ive thought of making a long time ago. Haha it's just that work's been making me too busy.
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