Colors [Of Rainbows and Fireworks]
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INFORMATION REGARDING THE STORY STORY TITLE: Colors [Of Rainbows & Fireworks]
AUTHOR: Zutrazelle
CHARACTERS: Mina || Sungjae
GENRES: Fantasy, Fluff, Romance, Mystery
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Shop Requested: 4D: The Wonderful Tale
DESCRIPTION:
Everyone loves colors. But some people hates rainbows.
That's Sungjae. He thinks that rainbows are the most cliche thing that had ever existed. He hated it more, after a disturbing memory.
Everyone loves colors. But some people hates fireworks.
That's Mina. She thinks that fireworks are a major disturbance to human beings. And besides, doesn't fireworks cause accidents? And after a disturbing memory, she hated it more.
Sungjae likes colors and fireworks, but hates rainbows; Mina likes colors and rainbows, but hates fireworks. Can two people like this ever find the crazy thing the world is looking for, namely, love? review
Title [4/5]
I can see the connection of your title with the story. I'll explain why I docked one point. I don't really think it's necessary to put the "[RAINBOWS AND FIREWORKS]" part. It makes your title sound a bit verbose. Your title is good, but I can't say that it's eye-catching. I see that title often, so it's not unique either.
Overall Aesthetics [3/5]
Your poster is pretty, and I'm guessing the reason why it's main color is purple is because it's the color that Sungjae emits that Mina can't guess the meaning, right?
The font was very big though, and there was no need for the change of colors at unnecessary scenes. It's a bit of an eyesore. I suggest of minimizing the size a bit to about 12 or 14 and making the font color black.
Descrition & Foreword [7/10]
Your description is catchy and good, but as I read your story, it really makes me confuse every time I recall your description. The
AUTHOR: Zutrazelle
CHARACTERS: Mina || Sungjae
GENRES: Fantasy, Fluff, Romance, Mystery
~STORY LINK~
Shop Requested: 4D: The Wonderful Tale
DESCRIPTION:
Everyone loves colors. But some people hates rainbows.
That's Sungjae. He thinks that rainbows are the most cliche thing that had ever existed. He hated it more, after a disturbing memory.
Everyone loves colors. But some people hates fireworks.
That's Mina. She thinks that fireworks are a major disturbance to human beings. And besides, doesn't fireworks cause accidents? And after a disturbing memory, she hated it more.
Sungjae likes colors and fireworks, but hates rainbows; Mina likes colors and rainbows, but hates fireworks. Can two people like this ever find the crazy thing the world is looking for, namely, love? review
Title [4/5]
I can see the connection of your title with the story. I'll explain why I docked one point. I don't really think it's necessary to put the "[RAINBOWS AND FIREWORKS]" part. It makes your title sound a bit verbose. Your title is good, but I can't say that it's eye-catching. I see that title often, so it's not unique either.
Overall Aesthetics [3/5]
Your poster is pretty, and I'm guessing the reason why it's main color is purple is because it's the color that Sungjae emits that Mina can't guess the meaning, right?
The font was very big though, and there was no need for the change of colors at unnecessary scenes. It's a bit of an eyesore. I suggest of minimizing the size a bit to about 12 or 14 and making the font color black.
Descrition & Foreword [7/10]
Your description is catchy and good, but as I read your story, it really makes me confuse every time I recall your description. The
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