First Kiss
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INFORMATION REGARDING THE STORY STORY TITLE: First Kiss
AUTHOR: JESLEN
CHARACTERS: Kim Jong-in (Kai) and Song Ga-In (OC) FEAT Oh Sehun (Cameo)
GENRES: Comedy, Fluff, Romance
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DESCRIPTION:
I can never suggest a better title for this story. I mean, the story revolved around that first kiss thingy, right? However, the title seems a little plain and common for my liking, which resulted me docking one point.
DESCRIPTION/FOREWORD [10/10]
Your description and foreword is accurate. It's really good. I honestly can't get the italicized words in your description out of my head. It didn't gave away that much, which made it even better.
STORY PLOT [27/30]
The plot is not the plot I read often, so it's not common. However, I've read three stories with similar plots to this, which I think is purely coincidence, so that can be said that your plot is familiar. The plot was rare though, it was a pretty good choice. I like how you set it at the right time.
GRAMMAR/SPELLING/VOCABULARY [19/2
AUTHOR: JESLEN
CHARACTERS: Kim Jong-in (Kai) and Song Ga-In (OC) FEAT Oh Sehun (Cameo)
GENRES: Comedy, Fluff, Romance
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Shop Requested: kalopsia, a review shop.
DESCRIPTION:
Never been kissed,
Song Ga-In promised herself that whomever she will share her first kiss with will be her first boyfriend.
And she had already set her eyes on Sehun oppa. But she had never counted the fact that saving Kim Jongin will drastically change everything...
I can never suggest a better title for this story. I mean, the story revolved around that first kiss thingy, right? However, the title seems a little plain and common for my liking, which resulted me docking one point.
DESCRIPTION/FOREWORD [10/10]
Your description and foreword is accurate. It's really good. I honestly can't get the italicized words in your description out of my head. It didn't gave away that much, which made it even better.
STORY PLOT [27/30]
The plot is not the plot I read often, so it's not common. However, I've read three stories with similar plots to this, which I think is purely coincidence, so that can be said that your plot is familiar. The plot was rare though, it was a pretty good choice. I like how you set it at the right time.
GRAMMAR/SPELLING/VOCABULARY [19/2
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