Chanyeol's Story

Basketball Girl
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Chanyeol come towards me and Sehun. I look at Sehun and find him grinned.

            “Okay time to go Noona. Look like your prince come to save you. See you at school.” He winked at me and then he just go leaving me. And at the same time Chanyeol arrived.

            “What are you doing here Ji? And who is that?” He pointed at running Sehun.

            “Ah Sooyoung and her boyfriend got free tickets to the amusement park. So she asked me to come with them. And that guy is Sehun. Oh Sehun. Sungjae’s friend and my hoobae actually.”

            “Your hoobae?”

            “Yes. He’s one of member at basketball team.”

            “Hoo.”

            “So this mall is ‘somewhere’ that you have to go? Emm to buy cellphone?” I pointed to the cellphone that he bring at his right hand.

            “Emm actually this cellphone was not my intention at first. But I remember Suzy’s advice about comunication in relationship.” I chuckled. Chanyeol frowned.

            “Why? Is there something funny?” He asked

            “No no. It’s okay. I find you very cute when you told me that Suzy got you an advice about relationship.” He just grinned then he holding my hand.

            “So, what are you doing here?” I asked him while we walked leaving the amusement park.

            “Do you want grab some ice cream Ji?” He asked still holding my hand.

            “Ah sure. But let me tell Sooyoung first.” I picked up my cellphone and ready to type a message to Sooyoung but I relized that my right hand was hold by Chanyeol. I chuckled.

            “Is it okay to take off my hand from yours Chanyeol? I’m not going anywhere.” Then he chuckled.

            “Ah okay. Sorry.” Then I typing a message to Sooyoung.

            Sooyoung-ii, you can go home with Sungjae first.

            Don’t have to wait for me. I met Chanyeol and he asked me

            to eat Ice cream with him ^^ :3

and sent it.

            “Okay lets go eat ice cream Chanyeol.” He just nodded and smiled then he holding my hand again.

            “I know you’re not going anywhere but I just want to show anyone in here that you’re mine.” Euhhhh I’m blushing. When Sungjae did that to Sooyoung it’s sound super cheesy but when Chanyeol did that to me it’s sound super sweet like I’m already got my Ice cream.

 

            When we arrived at Ice cream shop we decided to sit near the window. After the ice cream come Chanyeol said “Eat first. I tell you the story later.” I just nodded and start to eat my ice cream.

It’s like dream come true for me. Eating ice cream with my boyfriend. See him smiling at me all the time. Let him holding my hand. Ahh I just want to tell the world that I’m the lucky girl who got this handsome guy to be her boyfriend. I know it’s sound very dramatic and too much but I indeed a happy girl.

            “Are you done with your Ice cream?” He asked me

            “Eung.” I just nodded but then he chuckled.

            “Don’t do the aegyo to me please. You just make me want to kiss you right now.” Yeah so I want to explode right now because he told me like that.

            “Ahahaha sorry. You’re blushing like tomato again ehehe.” He just laughed.

            “Don’t do that to me too. I still can’t control my blushing Chanyeol.”

            “Nee nee Jiyeon. Okay, so what am I doing here. Emmm actually my uncle from my mother own this mall.”

            “Hah.. uwaa. So you come to visit him?”

            “No. I accompany my brother and Suzy to visit him.”

            “It’s sound same for me.”

            “No it’s not” suddenly he seem pissed off.

            “Ah I’m sorry.”

   

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rizkiamut
#1
Chapter 27: Finally I finished reading this story.
Park Chanyeol is really lucky. Despite his dumbest decisions, Jiyeon accept his feelings so soon. I want to see Park siblings punch him together hahaha before they live happily ever after *kidding.
Honestly, Yein's character is kind of blur in my head. She had no real and strong intention to split Chanyeon relationship because she wasn't that obsessed to Chanyeol. She disappeared so suddenly after 4 years, so it make the story didnt have enough conflict, especially when I expect some moment of jealousy and others kkkk.
But you made a good characterization about Park siblings very well. Their characters were very consistent. I like it. I enjoyed this story, especially when this is your first time writing in english. I appreciate your hard work and expect more for your upcoming story :)
rizkiamut
#2
Chapter 20: Aw, there is my name (sorry for late reading your note).
Can I at least forget about the real pairing in this story and the ending Jiyeon is going to have? I feel bad for Sehun. He always try to reach Jiyeon's heart but got rejected from Jiyeon.
Aww I dont know how to say. I know I give you advice about Chanyeon, but because I dont know what happen in the next chapter, I am still rooting for Sehun NOW. Just now.
rizkiamut
#3
Chapter 18: Aw. Full Seyeon moment in one chapter is not really good for my heart. And my favorite pair sinks at that moment.
rizkiamut
#4
Chapter 17: Finally I reach the chapter that make you confused, authornim!
Ahhh... if I read this chapter, yes, I want Jiyeon to end up with Sehun. He seems cherish Jiyeon so much more than Chanyeol.
rizkiamut
#5
Chapter 5: Ah just found time to continue reading this story.
I really like their characters. Park siblings are so cute. Chanyeol... cool, handsome, make my heart melt <3
I just dont understand why Chanyeol didnt have cellphone when he was rich. So, it's quite understanding why Park siblings call his reason for not calling and texting Jiyeon are bull.
About Suzy... wow! I didnt expect that. I curious about Minho and Chanyeol relationship, but since in the next chapter maybe i will know about that, i wont ask here hehe.
Ah, one more time. I just hope you will describe more about their moment or when they have conversation. Because I feel the progress in this story is so fast. Maybe for your upcoming story.
But dont worry. I enjoyed this story :)
missright76 #6
Chapter 27: YEAHHHH FINALLY!!!
But i hope you make a short sequal. Hehe.
jiyeonnie77 #7
Chapter 27: Yeaaaaaayyy!!!!!! I wanna cry because of happiness x'D ok no I'm just kidding(?) but I don't know must be happy or sad, because it's already end T_T but I'm happy because Chanyeol and Jiyeon will getting married XD Sehun-ah you're such a good boy '-')b hope you'll find good girl too(?) author nim please make a sequel about their marriage and having child and live happily ever after XD can you make it pleasee~? But if you're busy you don't have to make it(?)
kakito94
#8
Chapter 27: Ending???huaaa,i will miss this story so much..hehe..such a great ending author-nim....i really love it...tq for your great love story...i will wait for midnight snack n your another ff too...:)
K_Tiara #9
Chapter 27: Huaaaa.. Can you give us a sequel about their marriage family.. hahhaha
Good job authornim.. Thank you for your great story~
Waiting for your next story too ♡