Tomato girl

Basketball Girl
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Okay, things change very fast right here. Yesterday I cried for sure because of  him. But now he make my stomach full of butterflies. Yesterday I really want to break up but now he make me don’t want to move from his bed. Watch his face this closely make me want to scream. I never could imagine that I can see him like this right now. His eyes, his nose, and his lips. Yeah that lips. Slowly I touch my lips. We kissed. Not just simple peck on my lips. But he passionately kissed me. My face turn red right now. I’m blushing.

            “So this break up thing ended up in bed. Hmm interesthing..” This voice, Suzy? But suddenly Chanyeol open his eyes and get up from bed and of course I get up too.

            “Do you not know about knocking at the door before enter anyone room?” Chanyeol seem to pissed of.

            “Yeah I know. I knocked three times before but don’t know why the people in this room maybe got lost to romantic Island maybe so they couldn’t hear anything.” Suzy answered with flat face as always but still beautiful.

            “Whatever. Just mind your business.”

            “Dinner is ready. Your brother want you to eat. Bring your ... em girlfriend or ex right now?”

            “She’s my gilrfriend!” Chanyeol smirk. And guess what my face turn into tomato right now. Good job Park Chanyeol.

            “Ah yaa. Just quickly come down. I’m hungry already.” Suzy left the room. Suzy left us. Just the two of us inside the room.

            “So ..” Chanyeol open a conversation

            “What?” I asked, still blushing. Can’t look at him right now.

            “You are still my girlfriend right?” He asked with god damn most handsome smile. Yeah me turn into tomato again.

            “Emm...” He grab my cheeck. Good now my heart want to explode.

            “Look at me when I talk to you. So are you still don’t believe me when I said I like you? Do you want me to kiss you again?”

            “No no no. Emmm I do believe you. But I want you to explain about something I can’t really understand.” He smirk. Still handsome but you know, annoying.

            “I’m hungry. I can explain it to you tomorrow. I promise.” He smiled. I’m dying.

            “Okay. Lets eat.” So he grab my hand and lead me to leaving his room. But suddenly I remember something I really want to know.

            “Ah Chanyeol ..”

            “Yes.”

            “But can you tell me what’s your relationship with Suzy? Does she live here?”

            “Ah about that. Glad you asked. Emm don’t tell anyone. Suzy is my sister in law. She’s marry to my brother.”

            “What?” I get shocked. But Chanyeol just laugh handsomely.

            “Lets eat Jiyeon. I’m hungry.”

            “Ah okay. Sorry.” then he grab my hand again. Lead me to the dinning room.

At the dinning room Suzy and one man already sit. That man look older than Chanyeol. I bow to him and he just smile.

            “Ohh you must be Park Jiyeon. The one that make my cute little brother got sick because of rain Ahahaha. So Hai, I’m Lee Minho. Chanyeol’s older brothe

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rizkiamut
#1
Chapter 27: Finally I finished reading this story.
Park Chanyeol is really lucky. Despite his dumbest decisions, Jiyeon accept his feelings so soon. I want to see Park siblings punch him together hahaha before they live happily ever after *kidding.
Honestly, Yein's character is kind of blur in my head. She had no real and strong intention to split Chanyeon relationship because she wasn't that obsessed to Chanyeol. She disappeared so suddenly after 4 years, so it make the story didnt have enough conflict, especially when I expect some moment of jealousy and others kkkk.
But you made a good characterization about Park siblings very well. Their characters were very consistent. I like it. I enjoyed this story, especially when this is your first time writing in english. I appreciate your hard work and expect more for your upcoming story :)
rizkiamut
#2
Chapter 20: Aw, there is my name (sorry for late reading your note).
Can I at least forget about the real pairing in this story and the ending Jiyeon is going to have? I feel bad for Sehun. He always try to reach Jiyeon's heart but got rejected from Jiyeon.
Aww I dont know how to say. I know I give you advice about Chanyeon, but because I dont know what happen in the next chapter, I am still rooting for Sehun NOW. Just now.
rizkiamut
#3
Chapter 18: Aw. Full Seyeon moment in one chapter is not really good for my heart. And my favorite pair sinks at that moment.
rizkiamut
#4
Chapter 17: Finally I reach the chapter that make you confused, authornim!
Ahhh... if I read this chapter, yes, I want Jiyeon to end up with Sehun. He seems cherish Jiyeon so much more than Chanyeol.
rizkiamut
#5
Chapter 5: Ah just found time to continue reading this story.
I really like their characters. Park siblings are so cute. Chanyeol... cool, handsome, make my heart melt <3
I just dont understand why Chanyeol didnt have cellphone when he was rich. So, it's quite understanding why Park siblings call his reason for not calling and texting Jiyeon are bull.
About Suzy... wow! I didnt expect that. I curious about Minho and Chanyeol relationship, but since in the next chapter maybe i will know about that, i wont ask here hehe.
Ah, one more time. I just hope you will describe more about their moment or when they have conversation. Because I feel the progress in this story is so fast. Maybe for your upcoming story.
But dont worry. I enjoyed this story :)
missright76 #6
Chapter 27: YEAHHHH FINALLY!!!
But i hope you make a short sequal. Hehe.
jiyeonnie77 #7
Chapter 27: Yeaaaaaayyy!!!!!! I wanna cry because of happiness x'D ok no I'm just kidding(?) but I don't know must be happy or sad, because it's already end T_T but I'm happy because Chanyeol and Jiyeon will getting married XD Sehun-ah you're such a good boy '-')b hope you'll find good girl too(?) author nim please make a sequel about their marriage and having child and live happily ever after XD can you make it pleasee~? But if you're busy you don't have to make it(?)
kakito94
#8
Chapter 27: Ending???huaaa,i will miss this story so much..hehe..such a great ending author-nim....i really love it...tq for your great love story...i will wait for midnight snack n your another ff too...:)
K_Tiara #9
Chapter 27: Huaaaa.. Can you give us a sequel about their marriage family.. hahhaha
Good job authornim.. Thank you for your great story~
Waiting for your next story too ♡